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    If Only

    If only I knew you cared,
    I could smile forever.
    If only you knew that I love you,
    you would be able to live forever.

    If only I'd have told you to stay
    I would have known.
    If only I hadn't let you walk away
    next to me in bed you'd lay.

    If only I'd never gone to that bar,
    I'd still feel you near
    If only I'd never gotten in that car,
    maybe you'd still be here.

    If only you hadn't died
    I wouldn't feel so lonley.
    If only I hadn't killed you,
    I'd remember those words you once said.

    If only we had never met,
    you'd be happy.
    If only you didnt know me
    If only...

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    Re: If Only

    This was a little tricky. First I was kinda like... "Blah, lust another sappy love poem"... Then the more I read I noticed the sad little twist in the story. It very much made the whole poem worth the read.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: If Only

    I must agree with Peach... I didn't know what to say at first.
    If only....

    but I read it twice, and did find what Peach saw as the sadness.
    and I say very good.
    you earn a gold star...*holds out a gold star sticker*

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    Re: If Only

    Quote Originally Posted by overload View Post
    I must agree with Peach... I didn't know what to say at first.
    If only....

    but I read it twice, and did find what Peach saw as the sadness.
    and I say very good.
    you earn a gold star...*holds out a gold star sticker*
    ^^ thank you overload and peach... it is a regret poemas ya can tell

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