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Old Jul 24, 2007, 04:44 PM   #1 (permalink)
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If Only If Only

If Only If Only

Looks like I’m completely fine on the outside
It’s too bad I can’t say the same for the inside
Complete chaos, terrible dreams
Feels like I’m gonna tear at the seams
Sick and tired of all this bad stuff
Its getting harder and harder to stay tough
Things aren’t really going my way anymore
I wish things were just as they were before
So many opportunities I had
Not taking them makes me sad
Sitting still in my lonely bed
Trying to get it out of my head
Setting aside all my sorrow
Trying to think about tomorrow
Feels so much like I’m outta place
In this dark and dreary empty space
My heart feels like its slowly sinking
My mind is on the edge of breaking
So many tries for me to do things right
But now you want me out of your sight
And of my two loves
Now one friend one foe
Waiting here so lonely so lonely
Thinking in my head if only if only

...oh high school
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Old Jul 24, 2007, 07:07 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: If Only If Only

I love this poem!!!!!! I kinda feel like that in a way and it's just so deep!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this poem so much indeed!!!! So I hope to see more!!!!!
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Old Jul 24, 2007, 07:16 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: If Only If Only

this was beautiful. I think one of the most important things ever... is not to regret. But remember. Remember your mistakes, and own them.... and eventually everything will be ok. (as long as you dont make the same mistakes). So forget about "if only" you had done this and that. And think about "what if"....
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Old Jul 24, 2007, 07:23 PM   #4 (permalink)
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i love this poem. i can actually relate to it.
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Old Jul 24, 2007, 07:58 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: If Only If Only

Yes, this was a very nice poem, using the title of another poem.

You got it from Holes By Louis Sachar, am I correct?

Anyway, good adaptation, and I hope to see more
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Old Jul 25, 2007, 03:33 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: If Only If Only

A nice poem indeed... I didn't like something in it, something made it a little bit off, but I dunno what exactly, maybe it just reminded me of Linking Park too much and LP reminds me of my ex and he makes me thing of "if only" too ^^ lol

But it's really cool- you've done a good work with rythming and with explaining your feelngs, it was interesting to read it and I'll be waiting forward for more ^^
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Old Jul 27, 2007, 04:50 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Yes, this was a very nice poem, using the title of another poem.

You got it from Holes By Louis Sachar, am I correct?

Anyway, good adaptation, and I hope to see more
I didn't actually, that was just an original piece of work with no relation to any poems or songs. words just seemed to spill onto the page for that one, i was pretty fustrated with the futility of high school relationships.
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Old Jul 27, 2007, 06:13 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Re: If Only If Only

Oh sry, I just remember a song from that book called "If Only If Only."

My bad. lol
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