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Reply With QuoteI love this poem!!!!!! I kinda feel like that in a way and it's just so deep!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this poem so much indeed!!!! So I hope to see more!!!!!
If Only If Only
Looks like I’m completely fine on the outside
It’s too bad I can’t say the same for the inside
Complete chaos, terrible dreams
Feels like I’m gonna tear at the seams
Sick and tired of all this bad stuff
Its getting harder and harder to stay tough
Things aren’t really going my way anymore
I wish things were just as they were before
So many opportunities I had
Not taking them makes me sad
Sitting still in my lonely bed
Trying to get it out of my head
Setting aside all my sorrow
Trying to think about tomorrow
Feels so much like I’m outta place
In this dark and dreary empty space
My heart feels like its slowly sinking
My mind is on the edge of breaking
So many tries for me to do things right
But now you want me out of your sight
And of my two loves
Now one friend one foe
Waiting here so lonely so lonely
Thinking in my head if only if only
...oh high school
I love this poem!!!!!! I kinda feel like that in a way and it's just so deep!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this poem so much indeed!!!! So I hope to see more!!!!!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
this was beautiful. I think one of the most important things ever... is not to regret. But remember. Remember your mistakes, and own them.... and eventually everything will be ok. (as long as you dont make the same mistakes). So forget about "if only" you had done this and that. And think about "what if"....
... Not Ever Again...
i love this poem. i can actually relate to it.
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Yes, this was a very nice poem, using the title of another poem.
You got it from Holes By Louis Sachar, am I correct?
Anyway, good adaptation, and I hope to see more
Thanks to _gwenibe_ for this awesome sig!
A nice poem indeed... I didn't like something in it, something made it a little bit off, but I dunno what exactly, maybe it just reminded me of Linking Park too much and LP reminds me of my ex and he makes me thing of "if only" too ^^ lol
But it's really cool- you've done a good work with rythming and with explaining your feelngs, it was interesting to read it and I'll be waiting forward for more ^^
I didn't actually, that was just an original piece of work with no relation to any poems or songs. words just seemed to spill onto the page for that one, i was pretty fustrated with the futility of high school relationships.Originally Posted by ILikeApples5520
Oh sry, I just remember a song from that book called "If Only If Only."
My bad. lol
Thanks to _gwenibe_ for this awesome sig!
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