i like it a lot .Your word are very strong
and they have
a lot of feeling in it.
If you doubt me, I hope you read this.
I fly this ship. You just press buttons in my cockpit.
So stop it.
Wont find me under a rock, like you probably figured.
If what I did was a job, your application wouldnt be considered.
You slither.
Like a virus or a worm, infecting my hard drive.
Inflicting my misery makes you feel more alive.
Yet I strive.
To be better than this, more than any of you could be.
I'll never be the little girl who needs someone to take care of me.
To bare with me.
I live in a world that slaps you just to get you to slap 'em back.
Full of ruined people, whos only pleasure is how you react.
Life's too short for that.
You keep making all the wrong decisions.
Let the world pull strings, and you can give in.
I'll be livin'
Peace.
i like it a lot .Your word are very strong
and they have
a lot of feeling in it.
Thank you, its nice to get some feedback. Maybe Ill think of some more to say
AWESOME POEM!!!!!! You have a fan of your work right here!!!!!! I just love your poems!!!!! This one is just so storng and AWESOME!!!!!! So hope to see more!![]()
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
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