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    If You Say You Hate Me

    If you say I love you,
    Then I'll say I love you to.
    If you say to stay with you,
    Then I will stay forever.
    If you say to dance,
    Then I shall dance.
    If you say to keep going,
    Then I will walk a mile.
    If you say not to save you,
    I will anyway.
    But darling,
    If you say you hate me,
    Then I will still love you......
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    You know who you are(I think)!!!!!!♥♥♥
    Last edited by Akura13; Jul 03, 2007 at 09:50 PM. Reason: Commas and dots!! ^_^ ♥



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    Re: If You Say You Hate Me

    Pretty obedient, lol.

    It was entertaining and I liked it. You should probably throw those commas and periods in to make it look better.

    Good poem.
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    Re: If You Say You Hate Me

    Nice i really liked it.And what makes it even better is i know who that person is.But i really liked it.Good job all in all i give it a 4/5!!!

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    Re: If You Say You Hate Me

    I loved it simply really! It's just so romantic to me in a way! I just loved it so dearly so I hope to see more ok!
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    Re: If You Say You Hate Me

    Shut up little negi sensei......anyways thanks peoples!! I'm glad you likey my poem!



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    Re: If You Say You Hate Me

    I personally enjoy this poem. Not too many people are this loayl and devoted to the person they love, and it was nice to see some one write about it.

    I feel as though it could have been longer, as there are many more aspects i can think of to show your love to another, but overall it was very moving.
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