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It was entertaining and I liked it. You should probably throw those commas and periods in to make it look better.
Good poem.
If you say I love you,
Then I'll say I love you to.
If you say to stay with you,
Then I will stay forever.
If you say to dance,
Then I shall dance.
If you say to keep going,
Then I will walk a mile.
If you say not to save you,
I will anyway.
But darling,
If you say you hate me,
Then I will still love you......
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This poem goes out to the one I love!!
You know who you are(I think)!!!!!!♥♥♥
Last edited by Akura13; Jul 03, 2007 at 09:50 PM. Reason: Commas and dots!! ^_^ ♥
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Pretty obedient, lol.
It was entertaining and I liked it. You should probably throw those commas and periods in to make it look better.
Good poem.
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Because they have obtained that level they are arrogant. You have to kep in mind when you talk about these guys they are kind of dorks who probably didn't excel at much and this is their only outlet to flex their muscles. Their egos would suffer no less so the the forum suffers some more. Watch one way or another they will probably repond to this post with a threat. But there are better forums out there. Private messege Zev.
Nice i really liked it.And what makes it even better is i know who that person is.But i really liked it.Good job all in all i give it a 4/5!!!
I loved it simply really! It's just so romantic to me in a way! I just loved it so dearly so I hope to see more ok!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
Shut up little negi sensei......anyways thanks peoples!! I'm glad you likey my poem!
Phantasmagoria Lives On In The Hearts Of Their Fans, Japanese AND English!
"Because it's okay to hide your tears." - LM.C (Lovely Mocochang)
hmm straight to the point.lol.its awsome though..and its true if u really do love this someone..^.^ ..all those things u shall do ..
I personally enjoy this poem. Not too many people are this loayl and devoted to the person they love, and it was nice to see some one write about it.
I feel as though it could have been longer, as there are many more aspects i can think of to show your love to another, but overall it was very moving.
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