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    I'll always love him *Part one*

    The yelling continued
    from my loud voice
    I started breathing hard and
    suffocating having no choice

    My skin burns, my eyes bleed,
    and my heart continues to break
    Why won't this pain go away
    please tell me this is fake!!!

    Why do you keep ignoring me
    and Why do you continue this?
    Do you actually think I
    deserve this and won't be miss?

    Why don't you remember us
    together so happy and great?
    I thought we were meant to
    be like it was fate

    But no matter what you do to me
    I’ll always love you
    So continue what you do so I can
    stay with you too

    I was in a hurry so sorry if I misspelled or anything! ^^
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: I'll always love him *Part one*

    i really like this....but it is true? well not my business...so yeah keep up the good work.
    keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: I'll always love him *Part one*

    Quote Originally Posted by iluvmyloser View Post
    i really like this....but it is true? well not my business...so yeah keep up the good work.
    keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥

    No no princess it's not true! It was just someone I loved in the past thats all! ^^ And thank you for the comment!
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    Re: I'll always love him *Part one*

    Oh wow this poem was sad but I really liked it good job on describing kiwi good work!^^



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    Re: I'll always love him *Part one*

    Quote Originally Posted by Akura13 View Post
    Oh wow this poem was sad but I really liked it good job on describing kiwi good work!^^
    Thanks Akura for your comment as well! I love your work too just like princess so thanks!
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    Re: I'll always love him *Part one*

    very cute poem and by cute i mean
    the unwavering affection yo show
    in this poem , because love that is
    thrown away or neglected can bring some
    pretty harsh feeling but people are will to stay
    and ride the storm out which never ends in
    some cases.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: I'll always love him *Part one*

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    very cute poem and by cute i mean
    the unwavering affection yo show
    in this poem , because love that is
    thrown away or neglected can bring some
    pretty harsh feeling but people are will to stay
    and ride the storm out which never ends in
    some cases.
    My sister kinda think the same when she read this and she kinda said this to me "DUMP HIM! DUMP HIM! DUMP HIM!!!!! "Oh well! And thank you for your comment as well!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: I'll always love him *Part one*

    i love the poem... so sad and mysterious.. LOL.. huh... so it happend to you a long time ago right??... *sighs* Very sorry for you.. but just forget it... youre still young.. and there are many boys out there just waiting for you.. Hehehehe ^^ i really hate when that thing happens specially to girls like us!!...

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