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    I'll join you one day

    When everything seems to be falling apart
    When separated from the niche
    I’ll member what you have told me
    And our last depart

    I see those birds fly high above me
    Surpassing me as u have
    In the perfect blue sky which beckons me
    I see your refection of light
    And know, as always, that you are still beside me
    No matter how far it seems

    I’ll fly one day you’ll see
    And join you in that seamless sky
    I will fly too, believe in me
    I’ll make it through no matter how hard I must try

    Truth be told I’m afraid to soar
    but knowing that your here holding my hand makes
    it seem a bit less scary
    I can do it, cuz I’m no longer alone

    yah yah.. a very different poem... with a weird rhyming scheme well what can i say i just got finished writing a death metal song before writing this... it's mere style...lol i like it it was originally based on my friend who just moved away about an hour before i wrote this song\poem thing and while writing it i brought in some things inspired by a few other close friends

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    Re: I'll join you one day

    Even though this poem is about death, I think it's really cool how the interpretation of joining someone someday only after they have perished. I like the part about soaring into the sky to eventually see your friend again. Keep it coming with these poems.

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    A poem hm very nice but let me post me story about lost

    Lost on the way, no 1 to blame,no one to say,nothing to do wit the way everthing changed.So i fell a like a child who's lost, a little kid everything changed a lot, i didn't like all of the pain.I'm confused, a lot of it, is hard to take, and cause of it, everything chnaged. I thought i'd amke it through the pain everything changed.Given the chance i would happily dance on the grave of the one who shows no remorse. So i feel a little like a child who lost, a little like everything changed a lot. I didn't like all of the pain,everything chnaged.I'm confused,a lot of it,is hard to take n caused of it,everything changed i thought i make it through the pain everything changed nothing is plain nothing can be explained,nothing given the chance i would happily laugh,n be free to express wat i feel givem the chance i could hold up my head n smile again...
    If you can feel the pain, you are not badly wounded at all......

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    Re: I'll join you one day

    Is it mere style, or mere('s) style?
    Anyway, mere is writing poems! And I like 'em! Yay for that one. It certainly has a very interesting rhythm.
    I'm also sure that you'll meet your friend eventually one day.

    Nice poem, keep it up!
    You are now breathing manually. :P


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    Re: I'll join you one day

    Is that... refraction of light? or.. o.o

    A poem that deserves an applause very well done there.. ^^ I enjoyed reading this
    Nice way of using the words ^^ i like it.. hope to see more from you..

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