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    ''Ill keep holding on''

    Holding here and
    thinking fo the fear i had so long
    strangle of the wishes of death
    listening to strong fears
    opening for the arms of pain
    getting the sooner of the later

    Holding here
    trying to escape from my eternal tender
    holdin the tears
    wasting all my tears
    wasting all those years
    nothing has the chance to be good
    nothing has been close to God

    i'll keep holding on
    till im tired
    wasted all my tears
    wasting al those years
    and thats why
    ill keep holding on
    ill keep holding on
    holding till i feel
    i can fly
    thats all what i got today
    all i have to say
    to dream
    to live
    Last edited by Baal; Aug 25, 2006 at 03:34 PM.



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    Re: ''Ill keep holding on''

    lveing for the day is the most important part of life
    i agree with you there and this poem really expresses
    this alot. awesome poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: ''Ill keep holding on''

    Glad u like ''crimson angel''



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: ''Ill keep holding on''

    it was a great poem and thanks for the nic i might change it not sure there lol
    im gonna read it again when i get the chance
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: ''Ill keep holding on''

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    it was a great poem and thanks for the nic i might change it not sure there lol
    im gonna read it again when i get the chance
    U should put that tittle for ur( if ur going to make it)
    next poem or story
    like ur other poem My love for ur Crimsom

    and thanx a lot.



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    Re: ''Ill keep holding on''

    I like this! it's really great. Keep it up! ^.^
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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