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    I'll never forget

    I'll never forget what we had.
    You and I were together, always.
    When I was with you, I was the
    happiest I'd ever been.

    I'll never forget what you
    did for me. You've helped me
    through my toughest times and
    put a smile on my face when I was down.

    I'll never forget the days spent
    together. We were like husband and
    wife. Everything we did, we did
    together. We were one...

    I'll never forget your love for me
    and I hope you'll do the same. I
    will love you until the day I die,
    and, most importantly, I'll never
    forget you...


    I love you! Always have, always will.
    Please don't ever forget...


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    Re: I'll never forget

    awwww thats a really sweet poem. I love it how you said everything in a few stanza's. My favourite is;

    I'll never forget the days spent
    together. We were like husband and
    wife. Everything we did, we did
    together. We were one...
    Great work, hope to see more soon Atomik Sprout,
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    That was such a great poem! It was nicely written and it went well with the mood. Keep up the awesome work and I'll be looking forward to see more of your poems! ^^

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    OYur poems are so sad! They all make me want to cry! *tears up* You did great Keep up the good work!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: I'll never forget

    Thanks to all of you for taking time to read and comment my poem.

    It's hard to write when in moods such as these, which is why I'm glad you all liked it so much. ^_^

    Once again, thanks! I greatly appreciate it.


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    Re: I'll never forget

    Unconditional love is what it sounds like here...

    I always thought that is one of the best loves a person can have... I like the way you displayed your true feelings in not saying much... A reader can pick up on how much you really care in just them 4 stanzas... That's where I picked up your love for that person was "unconditional"... If you can pick up something like that in a matter of time then you captured the right words & turned it into emotions... { Keep up the good work you write... Waiting to see more... ^_^ }

    The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!

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    My genius...Yes my genius...

    another poem well done!
    So nice and beautiful!

    I hope you keep it up and I'd love to hear more from you ^_^

    -x- Zainab -x-

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    Re: I'll never forget

    @.@ nicely done there...emotions flourish through out the poem... it has it's aura~! @.@
    nicely done.. keep it up.. @.@

    very nice way with the words...

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