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    *I'll be at peace*

    I'm battered and Bruised,
    All f ucked up and used.

    Frustrated and jaded,
    The strength of my hatred.

    Has broken my soul,
    Now all I have left.

    Is this f ucking hole,
    I wish I was dead.

    I'll take a gun to my head.
    And I'll pull the trigger.

    It couldn't be quicker,
    Death's the release,

    I will be at Peace.
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    Re: *I'll be at peace*

    Hmm a poem with nice rhymes... nicely done .. ^^ i like the simpleness...but the flow dont go well though...to me.. keep it up

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    Re: *I'll be at peace*

    nice rhyming. but this poem seems sad in a way because this person wants to die.but nice, the simpleness and all!!=)

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