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    I'll stay alone

    I'm tired of feeling pain,
    of feeling guilty,
    of feeling like every time I take a breath,
    I'm doing something wrong,
    I hate everything so much,
    school,
    family,
    friends,
    always so loud,
    demanding,
    and needing perfection,
    something I just don't have to give,
    I cant be perfect,
    I cant please everyone,
    so maybe it's better if I just stay alone,
    far away from everyone,
    that way,
    neither of us are disappointed...

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    Re: I'll stay alone

    This actually reminds me of my sister always almost saying the exact same thing. And it kinda reminds me of me so thats why I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!! I hope to see more!
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    Re: I'll stay alone

    i like this poem i can relate to it n alot of ways
    and how you are always battling over what people
    say and thing about you not being able to accept
    you for who you are , maybe if they realised you are
    happy with you then maybe they wouldnt try and *change* you
    for the better
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: I'll stay alone

    this poem ...its me.lol.and its so true for so many people.great poem.i look forward to your next one!
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    Re: I'll stay alone

    tha's acutly nice and it touch me ....in many ways ...
    i 'll stay a lone that's very emotion some people have it ....
    i like it ....see more ...

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