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    "illusion"

    In the hollow closet of my mind,
    There is a world made up of dreams,
    A hallusination of the imagination,
    As the mind glides through desires.

    A longing to enter the world of black and white,
    Where the two merge to tell his tale,
    A story too bizzare for dreary reality,
    Where love blossoms in the most unlikelly places.

    Eyes searching the page for an entrance,
    Into a lifetime of a perfect illusion,
    Willing the time to seize its existance,
    For a miracle to breath life into those eyes.

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    Re: "illusion"

    Very beautiful in my opinion, well thought out and I'd like to think of it of being deep.

    Good work! ^^
    Live for Today, Wait for Tomorrow,
    and think about Yesterday.

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    Re: "illusion"

    thank you,
    I'm glad you enjoyed it^_^
    I have some poems that are like this one,
    and I'm going to post another when I'm finshed.

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