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    I'm a....

    I'm a tear without a drop.
    I'm a druggie without the drugs.
    I'm a alcoholic without the alcohol
    I'm a friend without your friendship
    Call me half empty or half full it won't matter
    I'm a writer without it's pen.
    I'm a book with blank pages waiting each day patiently for a writer like you to come along and write on these pages.
    Only half a heart, only half a person and yet if I'm so half why am I full of emotion?
    I'm a pet without it's owner waiting in the rain - freezing cold
    As each drop falls in my head I cry my heart out for you.
    I can't live without you by my side
    Your my darkness to my light
    Your the smile to the frown
    Your the color of this plan empty rose
    I'm a lover without you to call my love
    I'm a dreamer without you as its dream
    No matter which way I put it or which way it's written
    I'm nothing - but an empty nobody without you and your friendship by my side.
    Last edited by rikus demonic lover; Apr 23, 2008 at 10:19 AM.
    I wish a life of a love of a life. Send a light to through the darkest of nights. Let a kiss fly from the heart. Love me like you loved me in our past lives. Send this pain back to me these cold lonely nights. Haunt all my fanasties leave all my dreams shadow yourself once again into me....

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    Re: I'm a....

    Oh wow, such a wonderful poem. It is good although t gives me an 'empty' sensation.

    "Im a druggie without the drugs."
    Haha, I found that so cute.

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    Wow is right! Such an emotional poem! It left me in tears it was so emotional! Though it does leave me with empty sensation like Rave_Grip said and it has a few minor spelling mistakes like "pacientcly" or "writeer" but it's all good!
    "I'm a tear without a drop." thats so sad
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    Re: I'm a....

    good format, but its a little scary >.< plz do not go trying to kill yourself ^^ (good poem)
    death and life are one and the same

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    I loved the poem it had awsome format it had total completion you knew what was going on at the same time you were feeling up with emotion. Awsome poem real talent.

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    Thanks its a deication to my lover(s) lol hopefully hell know what I mean
    I wish a life of a love of a life. Send a light to through the darkest of nights. Let a kiss fly from the heart. Love me like you loved me in our past lives. Send this pain back to me these cold lonely nights. Haunt all my fanasties leave all my dreams shadow yourself once again into me....

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    I like how this poem slightly resembles a guy with one of those fidoras on =P you know the romantic hero with the wide brimmed hat? prolly not intentional and only a result of my delusion but I liked the poem for something that left me feeling so empty.
    althought I think you meant plain rose...

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    i thnk this line is cute.. shows a bit of vulnerability which is a total plus point (specially if the one who said it is a guy)

    As each drop falls in my head I cry my heart out for you.
    I can't live without you by my side
    "In your arms is where i will be, I love you till my forever ends."
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