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    I'm always here

    I want it to be you and me
    Coz you stole my heart
    And captured my soul

    In my dreams you're all I see
    You’re my first thought in the morning,
    And my last one late at night.

    You make me smile when I hear your voice
    When I dial your number, my heart pounds
    Like the first time a boy calls a girl.

    My love for you will never change
    Even if you are far away,
    I am always here to stay.

    If you don't like me, it's mind over matter.
    I don't mind and you don't matter

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    Re: I'm always here

    Hmmm. This is an okay poem here. I liked the flow and the overall effect
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    Re: I'm always here

    I really like this. No. I LOVE it! I know the feeling in this poem all to well. Reading your poem was like reading my thoughts... Im glad Im not the only person in the world, who loves someone that much.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: I'm always here

    hello girls! thanks for appreciating my poems. I made this poem for 2 hours. hehehe, too long huh? so hard to make one really.. Try to find the poem i posted 3days ago. Tommorrow is the Title, you will love it too. took me 2 weeks to make that one. whew! thanks again..

    If you don't like me, it's mind over matter.
    I don't mind and you don't matter

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    Re: I'm always here

    Hmm i agree with Kasai there... nice poem ^^
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    Re: I'm always here

    thank you for the appreciation guys.
    i can't make poems just yet, i dont have much time.
    i'm kinda busy here at work and making a poem
    needs time.

    thank you again.. i will soon try to make one again
    as soon as im free from projects im on to..
    see yah! =)

    If you don't like me, it's mind over matter.
    I don't mind and you don't matter

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    Re: I'm always here

    This poem is really good, I loved it, it's quite short but tells so much... really nice!!! A wonderful love poem!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: I'm always here

    It's so nice and cool. You are good and yes I agree it should be more. I want read more for its awesomeness. Love it!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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