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    I'm just a little dark inside!

    Just a little dark inside!
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    This is the story of God's little gift
    I run around happy full of bliss
    rotting corpses fill the air
    putrid love ignites despair

    Amiss the devils dreams
    I run around full of anguish
    humanity's happiness
    pure love passionate sadness

    What's wrong with my picture
    im happy when im sad
    but sad when im happy
    lifes unfair to those in despair

    I find my little happy place everytime i cry
    Close mine eyes to see theres darkness inside!

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    Small talk~~~ ranting of a lunatic ^_^
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    Something a little dark you all eat that stuff up. I keep strict to my way of writing poems and keep a misterious side... but i let it slip a little in this poem on lines 9-12. heh, i hope you all can get the meaning its actually very simple.

    Humans, always turn something bad into a good thing... even though its bad. But people always seem to find the bad into happiness as well. Is this what makes us humans.. and will it be our destruction or the reason we carry on the human bloodline into the future. I don't see much hope for this sad little world, but if thats the case... am i talking about myself as well?

    We are only humans its are fate to be so; don't pretend ur somthing your not. Only God can determine otherwise. So lets go about our sad little lifes and enjoy them, otherwise your just going to cry about stuff you should be thankful for happining in the first place.
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    Well comment and enjoy! critque is a good thing. "finding the good from the bad >.o"
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    Re: I'm just a little dark inside!

    im crazy too and i have no soul and my heart is pretty much black, hollow and cold

    thank you equinn

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    Re: I'm just a little dark inside!

    That was an interesting poem jade, most teenager go throught that kinda of stuff. keep it up man.

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    Re: I'm just a little dark inside!

    gasp! rabbit is 20 years old.~!
    well that is a old poem i made a long time ago.

    man i had so many mistakes ><,
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    Re: I'm just a little dark inside!

    That was very beautiful... *sniff, sniff*
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    Quote Originally Posted by jaderabbit
    gasp! rabbit is 20 years old.~!
    well that is a old poem i made a long time ago.

    man i had so many mistakes ><,
    it doesn't matter how old it is or how many mistake you had as long as you tried your best which It looks like you did.

    *claps*

    well done, well done

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