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    I'm nit sure in the title

    A dark day,
    as shadows blend.

    Cry of doves,
    these prayers I send.

    Taste of blood,
    the skin I sever.

    My filthy hands,
    dirty forever.

    I've never felt so damned,
    through these depths I tread.

    Waiting for summer,
    but caight in a slumper.

    My heart won't palpitate,
    my tongue won't salivate.

    As I tread these waters,
    just waves seem to follow.

    As I tread these waters,
    I fear death may lie for tomorrow.

    Alone and confused,
    cold and misconstrued.

    As I ride this tide,
    that'll take me under with you.
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    Re: I'm nit sure in the title

    AS I tread these waters,
    I fear death may lie for tomorrow.

    Alone and confused,
    cold and misconstrued.

    As I ride this tide,
    that'll take me under with you
    i like this poem alot and these verses
    sort of remind me of how i used to feel
    about life always leaping before i looked
    and sometimes getitng in over my head
    and going under , and how you expressed your self
    is very awesome.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: I'm nit sure in the title

    That's a good poem. It told a very interesting story. I look forward to reading your next one.
    "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
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    thanks guys I'm glad you guys like my poems^_^I'm still looking more of my poems in my room their somewhere in here I know it

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