Very nice I like it.
^.^ i dont feel like i help you much but ok
I thought I had it bad
But then I met u
It makes me sad
That someone I no
Have it worst
Then I do
Thanks for reminding me
That I’m not alone,
I’ll come to you
If I ever have to
This is my second poem ^^ thanks bou for helping out.
Thanks lifeforce! (:
Very nice I like it.
^.^ i dont feel like i help you much but ok
Na uh you inspired me to write it, so you did help, didn't you know? ^^"
Thanks lifeforce! (:
Sweet and short lolI wish I could have helped
I'll be there next time sigh...
^^ Violent you're alwayz doing stuff for me and thanks, but you really don't have to, i'm still not good enough yet and I need to work on it a lot. So far I can only write short poems and I wanna be able to write longer ones by myself, but thanks anywayz.
Thanks lifeforce! (:
very cool poem i know the feeling of thinking i have it
worse then someone else comes along and proves me wrong
life is cool like that,i hope to read more from you
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Very nice poem fma1012, but it was too short though!
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