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    I'm not alone

    I thought I had it bad
    But then I met u
    It makes me sad
    That someone I no
    Have it worst
    Then I do
    Thanks for reminding me
    That I’m not alone,
    I’ll come to you
    If I ever have to


    This is my second poem ^^ thanks bou for helping out.


    Thanks lifeforce! (:

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    Re: I'm not alone

    Very nice I like it.

    ^.^ i dont feel like i help you much but ok

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    Re: I'm not alone

    Na uh you inspired me to write it, so you did help, didn't you know? ^^"


    Thanks lifeforce! (:

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    Re: I'm not alone

    Sweet and short lol I wish I could have helped I'll be there next time sigh...

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    I'm on my grind in search to find whats on my mind, its one of a kind!

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    Re: I'm not alone

    ^^ Violent you're alwayz doing stuff for me and thanks, but you really don't have to, i'm still not good enough yet and I need to work on it a lot. So far I can only write short poems and I wanna be able to write longer ones by myself, but thanks anywayz.


    Thanks lifeforce! (:

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    Re: I'm not alone

    Quote Originally Posted by fma1012 View Post
    I thought I had it bad
    But then I met you
    It makes me sad
    That someone I know
    Has it worse
    Than I do
    Thanks for reminding me
    That I’m not alone,
    I’ll come to you
    If I ever have to


    This is my second poem ^^ thanks bou for helping out.
    *edited*

    and its an alright poem

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    Re: I'm not alone

    very cool poem i know the feeling of thinking i have it
    worse then someone else comes along and proves me wrong
    life is cool like that,i hope to read more from you
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: I'm not alone

    Very nice poem fma1012, but it was too short though!

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