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    Re: I'm not Amused (poem)

    TY-TY!!! OMG its been so long.. im so glad you keep writing. i think i might put some of my stuff up on here later... I LOVE YOU!!

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    i relaly liked it.. kinda shows how ppl always show off and your like shut up!! and some ppl you lvoe so much that you jsut want to hurt them a bit.. and they try to be better then you.. but you still lvoe them.. yea.. it hnik i get it

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    That was really good i am impressed. But fix line 5 and clean cut the last line. Rocked hard though. Arm wave in honor of the Dark Angel Swordsman!

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    Neat poem, DAS! (^_^) I like it very much. At first, it didn't really make complete sense to me of what the overall meaning that you were trying to convey, but when I read for the second time, it made sense. I got to say, you are pretty good poet! Keep up the great work, bud! Hope to see some more.

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    thank you all. i am glad all you enjoyed it. yes, it is a tad bad and i made a weird spelling error (no idea what happened...O_O) i am trying to make good poems, so any help is appreciated. anyways, i try. if you liked, it then thank you once again.
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    Its good Ilike it alot
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    Re: I'm not Amused (poem)

    ummm, that was pretty dark man, i really like this poem. good job, keep it up.

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    honestly i can't relate to tis poem but overall it was well written. so i'll rate it a 7/10 p

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    8/ 11, that's what I'll rate to you..... Elie..... Now you have some rating skills.....

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