That's a very good poem. It makes the statement that no matter how hard someone tries they're never gonna change who you are and I think that's great.
Come on and take your shot
Everything you say is what I'm not,
Your never gonna make me see
That what I am is what I'm not supposed to be,
I'm never gonna change for you
So now what are you gonna do.
I'll fight you until the very end
About all the time that I will spend,
Proving that what I am is fine
And that my life is completely mine,
I am always gonna be free
To do whatever I like, I just wanna be me.
That's a very good poem. It makes the statement that no matter how hard someone tries they're never gonna change who you are and I think that's great.
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Hmmm. Rhyming moem. Me likeyReally interesting, and I like your theme about self-identity. Keep up the good work ^_^
Awesome poem and you get your point across quite well! Keep up the good work flaminghate and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!
A dark poem, dude well done. Your poem reflects some anger towards somebody, could it be that you wrote it based on a real life experience?
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hmm what the others comment is true... Nice poem ~!
keep on the good work
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