+ Reply to Thread
Results 1 to 6 of 6

Thread: I'm Not Sorry

  1. Aug 31, 2009 12:01 AM #1
    Zev
    Zev is offline
    SuperModZilla Zev is making a name for themselves Zev is making a name for themselves Zev's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2001
    Location
    Missouri
    Posts
    699
    Thanks
    14
    Thanked 65 Times in 61 Posts

    I'm Not Sorry

    Even though sometimes I find myself hating your guts
    Looking at your old wrinkly face
    Is simply pain enough

    Your cooking always tasted like burnt rubber
    How you ever convinced some man to marry you
    I will always wonder

    And oh yeah, I totally went there
    I'm over your cold glares
    And your mean degrading affairs

    I can't believe I once considered you my family
    Although I forgave you already
    Doesn't change the fact you are dead to me, Grammy

    I wrote this about my dearest Grandma Louise, because I recently saw her one last time. We havn't said a single word to each other in 6 years. If I ever were to say something to her again, this is what I would say.
    Last edited by Zev; Aug 31, 2009 at 12:32 AM.

    Signature is a Gwenibe original.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  2. Aug 31, 2009 12:42 AM #2
    !beast
    beast is offline
    Banned beast may be famous one day beast may be famous one day beast's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2008
    Location
    Michigan United States
    Posts
    1,499
    Thanks
    411
    Thanked 132 Times in 126 Posts

    Re: I'm Not Sorry

    Working out your frustration through writting certainly makes for an excellent work. Contribute more often please.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  3. Aug 31, 2009 11:53 AM #3
    blackrose92
    blackrose92 is offline
    Otaku Robo Soccer Champion, Gorillaz Groove Session Champion blackrose92 is off to a good start blackrose92's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2007
    Location
    Texas
    Posts
    484
    Thanks
    69
    Thanked 33 Times in 31 Posts

    Re: I'm Not Sorry

    hmmm i dont know if you would take offense or not but your poem is comical. no disrespect to however you may feel or what your purpose for writing this poem
    didnt know you could write. (poetry lol)
    good job
    I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the Greatest Thank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  4. Aug 31, 2009 09:14 PM #4
    Zev
    Zev is offline
    SuperModZilla Zev is making a name for themselves Zev is making a name for themselves Zev's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2001
    Location
    Missouri
    Posts
    699
    Thanks
    14
    Thanked 65 Times in 61 Posts

    Re: I'm Not Sorry

    Thanks Beast, I just don't always have the inspiration that you do.

    Yeah, whenever I get really angry, sometimes I start to laugh because I realize I'm taking things over the top and it's ridicules. I swear I'm not bi-polar or anything! After I wrote my poem, I read it to myself and started laughing myself.

    Anywho, constructive criticism is always welcome, I want the cold hard truth, don't spare my feelings. *Looks away*
    Last edited by Zev; Sep 01, 2009 at 12:01 AM.

    Signature is a Gwenibe original.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  5. Sep 06, 2009 01:36 PM #5
    RayMe
    RayMe is offline
    Rawr~ :3 Boxteroid Champion, flyplane Champion, Home Run Champion, Bubbelfutsch Champion, Fire Fighter Champion, Brendans Soccer Champion, Movie Star Match-Up Champion, Total blackout Champion, Text Your Reflexes Champion, Scary movie Champion, Hulk Smash Up Champion, Star Wars Champion, Extreme Snowboarding Champion, Air Disc Champion, Action Fish Champion, A Game Of 3 Halves Champion, Battleball Champion, Hacky Sack Champion, FAD 2003 Champion, SQRL Golf Champion, Dr Yeckyl and Mr Ride Champion, Sky Glide Champion, Flyer Champion, Finnair Champion, Drachenjagd Champion, Canyon Glider Champion, City Surfing Champion, Action Driving Game Champion, Extreme Rowing Champion, Kardahdg Champion, Acceleracers Track Mod Champion, Final Test Champion, Du Wichtel Champion, Pedal Power Champion, Camera Killer 2 Champion, Bike Mania on ICE Champion, ATV Winter Challenge Champion, Caliber Dash Champion, Diesel and Death Champion, Snow Ride Champion, Camera Killer Champion, Pepsi Jet Ski Champion, Bumper Cars Championship Champion, Drifting Champion, Get A Grip Champion, Rooney on the Rampage Champion, Death To Ninja Champion, Kung Fu Hustle 2 Champion, Muay Thai Champion, Metal Arm FAWEGE Champion, Knife Champion, Classroom Fighter Champion, Nobuyuki Forces 3 Champion, Caddeva Champion, Sewer Dweller Champion, Angel Mart Champion, Snowy Champion, Bola Champion, Boiler Room Champion, Bobcat Champion, Amazon Quest Champion, Booty Champion, Five Errors Champion, Mind Your Marbles Champion, Angel Fruit Champion, Binggrae Champion, Candy Shoot Champion, Imperial tiles Champion, Himalayaya - Yeti Strikes Back Champion, Terrorist Attack Champion, Americas Army Champion, Special Operations Champion, Destroy the robots Champion, Cubicle Warfare Champion, Battle Field Champion, Weapons Dealer Champion, Army Copter Champion, Flat War Champion, Terrorist Alert Champion, Bully Basher Champion, Reaktor Champion, Bungee Rescue Champion, The Contraptor Champion, Boris Champion, Carling Cold Champion, Paddleball Champion RayMe is making a name for themselves RayMe is making a name for themselves RayMe's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2006
    Location
    Not somewhere I love but I am glad I have a home so far
    Posts
    3,804
    Thanks
    82
    Thanked 61 Times in 56 Posts

    Re: I'm Not Sorry

    Love the rhymes o.o I wish i could do rhymes as good as that.. but really.. it is comical.. xD love it!

    Short and sweet.. simple yet elegant...nicely done there ^^

    aww...Now we "have" to spare your feelings >.<

    It needs ... umm.. what you call those... punctuation marks! Yes yes..it need those... so the grammar would be more "complete"

    I can't spot any other.. o.o
    Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!!
    I'm BACK AO!
    >>>facebook<<<

    My Siggy is in progress... just you wait... :3
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  6. Sep 06, 2009 10:15 PM #6
    Zev
    Zev is offline
    SuperModZilla Zev is making a name for themselves Zev is making a name for themselves Zev's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2001
    Location
    Missouri
    Posts
    699
    Thanks
    14
    Thanked 65 Times in 61 Posts

    Re: I'm Not Sorry

    Ouch! Geeze Ray! lol j/k Thank you. Yeah, I could use more punctuation, I just got a little lazy. Glad you liked my vent poem of hate.

    Signature is a Gwenibe original.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
+ Reply to Thread
« Previous Thread | Next Thread »

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts

Forum Rules