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    What do some of you mean by more imagery? Would it make the poem more intersting or entertaining? Would people who don't normally read poems still enjoy it?
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    what most of us mean by imagery, is with your poem give the reader something to picture almost as if your telling a story! If you write a poem correctly it tells a story and the reader can begin to picture exactly what you're talking about! Just a suggestion, but look at some of the other poems.

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    Any poem, no matter how crappy, is Cool in my book if it shits on Emo kids.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shodokan View Post
    So TaurusDemon23 is the only one who gets it?
    No, he's the only one that likes it.

    Sarcasm is no excuse for laziness. Your attempt to poke fun at all the god-awful emo poetry that infests this section would be more successful if your "poem" was better constructed.
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    lol is that sumkinda jke???????????????????

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zui Quan View Post
    No, he's the only one that likes it.

    Sarcasm is no excuse for laziness. Your attempt to poke fun at all the god-awful emo poetry that infests this section would be more successful if your "poem" was better constructed.
    There are people besides him who enjoyed reading it who posted in this thread. I bet there are quite a few lurkers who enjoyed it too. People who don't even like poetry enjoy it.
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    Oh my God...angst.
    Poem by itself might be good but just about
    everything else ain't. If you really need to write
    poems that has this particular feeling, please do not never
    ever use so korn way to express it.


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    Re: I'm sad so I cut my wrist and wear black

    Quote Originally Posted by animechick View Post
    thats not even a poem. thats just discrimination against a kind of people you know nothing about. this should defiantly be deleted. im not even sure if you wanted to try on this one..
    I don't know, as much of a jackass as he normally is in the forums, that was amusing if it were meant as "discrimination" against the goths, or should I say the clique that wants to be associated with the Matrix fans, but can't afford the Ray Ban shades to complete the ensamble?

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