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    "I'm a screw up" ( short poem )

    On the inside it feels like no one cares and on the outside people do care,
    But what I don't understand is why,
    Do I feel no one cares...
    I always screw up in life and mess things up...
    Yet people still care...
    I'm such a cry baby when it comes to my feelings...
    Why is all I ask....
    Do you care this much about a screw up like me?

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    Re: "I'm a screw up" ( short poem )

    i know what you mean
    i think ppl dont care
    but they say they dont
    then i push them away
    becuse i think they are liing
    When you walk away
    You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
    Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go

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    Re: "I'm a screw up" ( short poem )

    This is a great poem!!! I think so! And it's short as well! I kinda feel the same way reading all this! Hope to see more!!!
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