I'm so sorry my love (part one)
This is a poem
I’m writing from my heart
If you don’t understand it
It’s because it’s not fully there
The reason for this
Is because I have a confession to make
That while dating you
I made a mistake
So lets go back
To the begging of our love story
So that I can maybe explain
Why my heart is like it is
I was new
Gave you a random
Hi
How are you
You replied back to me
And we started laughing
Having fun
Getting to know each other
Well we started dating
It was different from all the others
We had our ups and down
Until I found out about her
That was the worst thing I ever dealt with
What has caused me the most pain
Because you see
There we three
The first I knew about
For she had told me
And I kept my feelings from her
So that she wouldn’t see
Then there was another
That I still haven’t met
Haven’t talked to
But yet She had your heart
Re: I'm so sorry my love (part one)
Did you write that Poems on yourself? It is very Beautiful Poems and hope I can read it more
Re: I'm so sorry my love (part one)
Yes I did.. it didn't take me long to write all three parts due to the fact that when i wrote it... it just kinda.. came out.. And thank you for liking it even though it's sad.. ^-^
Re: I'm so sorry my love (part one)
Wow angelic you have a way with poems! keep it up I liked it although I have to agree with blackbird this is completely different from your other works! keep it up I hope to see more from you.
Re: I'm so sorry my love (part one)
Wow! That hurts! It was great! So sad that you have to feel that way though. Well I like your work keep it up! look forward to the rest!