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    I'm so sorry my love (part one)

    This is a poem
    I’m writing from my heart
    If you don’t understand it
    It’s because it’s not fully there

    The reason for this
    Is because I have a confession to make
    That while dating you
    I made a mistake

    So lets go back
    To the begging of our love story
    So that I can maybe explain
    Why my heart is like it is

    I was new
    Gave you a random
    Hi
    How are you

    You replied back to me
    And we started laughing
    Having fun
    Getting to know each other

    Well we started dating
    It was different from all the others
    We had our ups and down
    Until I found out about her

    That was the worst thing I ever dealt with
    What has caused me the most pain
    Because you see
    There we three

    The first I knew about
    For she had told me
    And I kept my feelings from her
    So that she wouldn’t see

    Then there was another
    That I still haven’t met
    Haven’t talked to
    But yet She had your heart

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    Re: I'm so sorry my love (part one)

    Did you write that Poems on yourself? It is very Beautiful Poems and hope I can read it more

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    Re: I'm so sorry my love (part one)

    Yes I did.. it didn't take me long to write all three parts due to the fact that when i wrote it... it just kinda.. came out.. And thank you for liking it even though it's sad.. ^-^

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    Re: I'm so sorry my love (part one)

    Wow angelic you have a way with poems! keep it up I liked it although I have to agree with blackbird this is completely different from your other works! keep it up I hope to see more from you.
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    Re: I'm so sorry my love (part one)

    Wow! That hurts! It was great! So sad that you have to feel that way though. Well I like your work keep it up! look forward to the rest!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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