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    Im sorry, Im really sorry

    Im sorry, Im really sorry

    I left you there with blood dripping down you face,
    yet I only watched as the light from your eyes slowly faded
    it left you bright eyes dull again and made it appear lifeless
    But when that happened the only thing I said was 'sorry'

    You lay there with no emotions in your eyes
    as you looked at me with a blank face that smiled at nothing
    as I walked away back into the darkness from where i camed from
    All I could say to you was 'sorry'

    I walked forward into the darkness then turned back to look at you
    those eyes were looking at me sending shivers up my body
    But I turned back to face the road I was walking and walked
    But the only thing I said was 'sorry'

    Then in the dark gate my words leave my mind
    'Im sorry that I left your life so blank
    Im sorry I left those eyes full of nothing
    Im sorry I left you without a word
    Im sorry, Im really sorry'

    Here is my fourth poem and i wrote this because it happened to me so enjoy
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    Re: Im sorry, Im really sorry

    :O Awesome! The person is regretting ... nice poem!

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    Re: Im sorry, Im really sorry

    I like it.... Keep it up.... I hope you can share more of your poems... Bcuz I think it that's how you express yourself...
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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    Re: Im sorry, Im really sorry

    nice poem u need to join the poem clan

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    Re: Im sorry, Im really sorry

    very well written. man thats a great way of writing , keep it up
    great poem
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    Re: Im sorry, Im really sorry

    wow that was really nice man, keep it up.

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    Re: Im sorry, Im really sorry

    Wow... just wow. That was nicely done.
    Please don't send me chainmail. I'll put you on my ignored list.

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