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    I'm you angel..

    I'll hold you hands..when you cry...
    Hold my wings..when..your down..
    I'll sing you my song just to make you smile..
    Be strong for I will hold you in my arms..
    Believe in yourself...... for I will be beliving in you..

    I'll make your world perfect for you..
    Protecting you...and seeing you smile with tears of happiness..
    I'll shed your darkness.. and make you happy every moment....
    Following wherever you are...through day and night...
    I'll stay with you forever..
    Just to..make you secure..

    You dont have to be afraid.. anymmore...
    I'll let your wishes come true..
    Bring your lost family..that you have searched for a thousand miles..
    I'll make you into a beautiful princess..
    For I'm your angel...

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    Re: I'm you angel..

    Hee hoe huff fumm i smell some grammatical and spelling mistakes

    "I will hold your hands"
    "Hold my wings..when..you you are down"
    "for i will believe in you" recommend u take away "be" ^^

    Other than that is...beautiful poem this time...this will give hope and happiness to those loved 1...so many promises made just dont betray it

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    hey thanks for showing me where I made the mistakes^_^

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    Re: I'm you angel..

    Very nice poem indeed, except for some mistakes.
    A good poem to assure someone that he / she is
    not alone.

    If you don't like me, it's mind over matter.
    I don't mind and you don't matter

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