powerxxx

a bit of a long poem , but please i need your opinions on it
thanx!!!!
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I am writing once again
Till my pens very last drop
The words just don't seem to end
Words I wanted to give to someone out there
The same question
Returns into my mind
Each time I hold a pen
Each time I write down a word
Is there a person
Is there a person out there?
That will be given these words
These words in my book
That I spent hours, days and weeks writing in
As I lift my hands holding my book
And throw it into the flames
And sit in my place seeing it burn
And my hearts telling me
There is no one out there that fit those words
Each time I think of that
Tears run down my face
The sadness flow inside my veins
The loneliness eating and feeding on my feelings
Each time the dawn arrives
I hope to see a new sun
A sun filled with joy
Not a sun rising with pain
I am crying my heart out
I am screaming to my soul
To stop this pain
Each time
Each day
My heart hurts so badly
It's just so painful
To live this way
Alone
Sad
But
She is there
Somewhere out there
But I still just can't
Reach my hands to her
I am still blind to see her
Despite of what my heart feels
I still wait to see her
I still believe that I will meet her
She is that angel that flies around me
She is the goddess that gives me hope
The one that turns off
The flame in my soul
An angel
With a snow white face
And moon colored wings
A face that keeps me going
And wings that protects me from what’s around me
I feel safe with her
I feel happy next to her
I see my first true smiles between her arms
The angel that only I could feel
And will someday see
The undying smile
The unfading feeling
And the eternal love
My loving angel
I wish that you can hear me
Because I can hear you
And can feel your warming love towards me
I am waiting
Still waiting
And waiting forever
To feel no one but you
My angel
My goddess
And my love
My eternal love
My Sweet, Warm, Undying
Love
My imaginary love
I hope you can hear me
Because I will tell you
From my deepest, truest source of feelings in my heart
I love you

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kedar

A wonderful love poem.

~Simply spectacular, Powerxxx. Though it was a rather long poem, I never lost interest in reading further; it kept me going. For that, I call this a great piece of poetry. It has a very elegant flow to it, at least I think so. ^_^ Keep up the great work, and please be sure to share more of your works with all of us.

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HieisLove

I love your poem. It's so beautiful. I'm so interesting in your work.......

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For3v3r_Lost

It's such a beautiful poem. So long, it still have my interest to read ahead and finish it. Keep it up that way, I would like to read some more when you post some up.

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02134

nice feeling

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I'll do it man.