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    Imaginary Love

    a bit of a long poem , but please i need your opinions on it
    thanx!!!!
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    I am writing once again
    Till my pens very last drop
    The words just don't seem to end
    Words I wanted to give to someone out there
    The same question
    Returns into my mind
    Each time I hold a pen
    Each time I write down a word
    Is there a person
    Is there a person out there?
    That will be given these words
    These words in my book
    That I spent hours, days and weeks writing in
    As I lift my hands holding my book
    And throw it into the flames
    And sit in my place seeing it burn
    And my hearts telling me
    There is no one out there that fit those words
    Each time I think of that
    Tears run down my face
    The sadness flow inside my veins
    The loneliness eating and feeding on my feelings
    Each time the dawn arrives
    I hope to see a new sun
    A sun filled with joy
    Not a sun rising with pain
    I am crying my heart out
    I am screaming to my soul
    To stop this pain
    Each time
    Each day
    My heart hurts so badly
    It's just so painful
    To live this way
    Alone
    Sad
    But
    She is there
    Somewhere out there
    But I still just can't
    Reach my hands to her
    I am still blind to see her
    Despite of what my heart feels
    I still wait to see her
    I still believe that I will meet her
    She is that angel that flies around me
    She is the goddess that gives me hope
    The one that turns off
    The flame in my soul
    An angel
    With a snow white face
    And moon colored wings
    A face that keeps me going
    And wings that protects me from what’s around me
    I feel safe with her
    I feel happy next to her
    I see my first true smiles between her arms
    The angel that only I could feel
    And will someday see
    The undying smile
    The unfading feeling
    And the eternal love
    My loving angel
    I wish that you can hear me
    Because I can hear you
    And can feel your warming love towards me
    I am waiting
    Still waiting
    And waiting forever
    To feel no one but you
    My angel
    My goddess
    And my love
    My eternal love
    My Sweet, Warm, Undying
    Love
    My imaginary love
    I hope you can hear me
    Because I will tell you
    From my deepest, truest source of feelings in my heart
    I love you
    Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali
    I Fly Swiftly through the air
    I Spread My Wings Without A trace

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    Re: Imaginary Love

    A wonderful love poem.

    ~Simply spectacular, Powerxxx. Though it was a rather long poem, I never lost interest in reading further; it kept me going. For that, I call this a great piece of poetry. It has a very elegant flow to it, at least I think so. ^_^ Keep up the great work, and please be sure to share more of your works with all of us.

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    Re: Imaginary Love

    I love your poem. It's so beautiful. I'm so interesting in your work.......
    ♥ (¯'·._.·[GEISHA ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥

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    Re: Imaginary Love

    It's such a beautiful poem. So long, it still have my interest to read ahead and finish it. Keep it up that way, I would like to read some more when you post some up.
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    Re: Imaginary Love

    nice feeling



    I'll do it man.

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