Ooh... a peace poem..i made one too not long before..
but yours more about the world...environmentalist's style..i have one too
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but yours is nice...it's almost complete...and i could see you try to rhyme there... hmm...the first stanza a bit off with the rhyme and the last one,...train slowly.. you will improve soon enough ^^
Nicely done ^^ keep up the good work..you are improving a lot..![]()


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i made one too not long before..
but yours more about the world...environmentalist's style..i have one too 



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