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    Impossible to forget.

    My brain is buzzed,
    But my mind is clear,
    With my need,
    To get far away from here.

    My heart it achs,
    And it's so terrible bad,
    That it could break,
    And I simply wish it would.

    I can't shake these tears from my eyes,
    And I can't believe, that again,
    I'm being fed lies!
    I don't do it to you, so how is it,

    That you call yourself in love with me,
    And yet it's so easy for you to lie,
    Like I'm to just let it be.
    When mistrust, insecurity, and paranoia,

    Is what killed "us" in the first place,
    It makes me want to pull my corset tight,
    Tug and wrestle and pull the lace,
    Untill theres only blue on my face.

    Love honor and devotion,
    All that worthless once
    It's been fully broken.
    I need protection, love,

    But most of all consideration,
    It's really not hard,
    IT takes little consentration
    And yet a suprising amount of effort.

    I'll wipe these tears from my eyes,
    And continue without the lies!

    My heart does ach, and though it should break,
    I will piece it back togather again!

    And No matter how clear my mind may get,
    You'll be impossible to entierly "forget"

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    Re: Impossible to forget.

    *stares at the empty space for comments* this was not that long!!! And it was interesting to read it! Am I the only one who thinks so?

    This is a very sad poem but very strong and it makes the reader sure that everything will be alright from then on, that everything will change for the best (at least that's how I feel)

    Nice and I can just imagine how the feeling because I know how that feels...

    It was great to take a look in this part of life again and I hope I'll see more...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Impossible to forget.

    Thanks a lot Laura. I appriciate your comments all the time. I'm glad you liked this one, it's one of my personal favorites.

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