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    [I'mSorry]

    Go Away, Because I Just Don't Care,
    Tried It All Before, But I Cannot Bare,
    The Thought Of Falling Down Again
    Waiting For My Moment, Still Wondering When,
    Fighting Through The Darkness And The Light,
    Still Wondering Why I Get Up And Fight,
    Could It Be I Really Am I Outta My Mind,
    If You Missed That You Really Must Be Blind,
    Letting Go Of Everything You've Ever Held Dear,
    But I've Got Myself, Now Go Away, Fight The Fear,
    Because One Day I'll Come Running Through,
    Come Running Through The Pain For You,
    Standing Strong Standing My Ground,
    You Can Get The Biggest Asshole Around,
    He Wont' Have Enough Strength In Him,
    Yes I'm Crazy, And Maybe Slightly Dim,
    But When Did You Care About Me,
    Oh Wait I Asked You, You Replied Maybe,
    Maybe What, I'll Wait For Awhile,
    Dreaming Of That Beauty, Contained In Your Smile,
    One Day I'll Come Back I Promise From My Heart...
    Nothing Can Or Ever Will Keep Us Apart.
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    Re: [I'mSorry]

    waw strong promise u made there by the end... really convincing

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    Re: [I'mSorry]

    Thanks RayMe^_^
    glad you like it
    this took me about 10 minutes to finish.

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    Re: [I'mSorry]

    Quite like "Love Will Tear Us Apart" by Joy Division.
    You're very skilled as a writer.
    Longer and with more revision, you could have a good song on your hands.

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    Thanks CaulfieldQuestion,
    So you think this can be a song?

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    Definitely.
    A little longer, a few revisions according to the fit of music and then you're set. You have a song on your hands, seriously.

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    cool I'll do that on some paper and ask my freind Jordan to make a beat for it

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    Re: [I'mSorry]

    Very nice poem about standing up for yourself and holding on the one you love no matter what. Good job I really liked it.
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