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Reply With QuoteInebriated huh?.... Got any left?.
No, seriously though... that poem was a trip. But.. I seems as though thats what it was intended to be. Very unique subject, I wouldn't mind seeing what eles you come up with. Do keep it up!
The bird playing at the water's edge seemed
blinded by the light.
He swaggered off down the shore in a quirky
sort of way.
My mouth curved up into a smirk.
Eyes stained with sunspots guide my
way into a place I never knew could exist.
The taste of salt in my mouth
told me a story of bravery and bounds.
Eyes rolling, water spurting out.
I turned on my side a starfish fell from my mouth
It slothed away leaving behind a pearl blue as the sky itself.
Hand extending out, the old bird swaggered by,
gulping up the pearl as he set out to fly.
Dear Dinah...
Inebriated huh?.... Got any left?.
No, seriously though... that poem was a trip. But.. I seems as though thats what it was intended to be. Very unique subject, I wouldn't mind seeing what eles you come up with. Do keep it up!
... Not Ever Again...
Thank you ^-^...and you'll be surprised to know that I don't drink lol.
but anyway..yeah I wanted it to come off as a bit trippy/mystical kind of. I am glad you liked it though.
Dear Dinah...
Well I loved the poem! It was just so smoothing!!!!! And it was just so awesome reading it!!!!!! So I hope to see more!!!!!!!!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
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