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    Inerbriated

    The bird playing at the water's edge seemed
    blinded by the light.

    He swaggered off down the shore in a quirky
    sort of way.

    My mouth curved up into a smirk.

    Eyes stained with sunspots guide my
    way into a place I never knew could exist.

    The taste of salt in my mouth
    told me a story of bravery and bounds.

    Eyes rolling, water spurting out.

    I turned on my side a starfish fell from my mouth

    It slothed away leaving behind a pearl blue as the sky itself.

    Hand extending out, the old bird swaggered by,
    gulping up the pearl as he set out to fly.
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Inerbriated

    Inebriated huh?.... Got any left?.

    No, seriously though... that poem was a trip. But.. I seems as though thats what it was intended to be. Very unique subject, I wouldn't mind seeing what eles you come up with. Do keep it up!
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    Re: Inerbriated

    Thank you ^-^...and you'll be surprised to know that I don't drink lol.
    but anyway..yeah I wanted it to come off as a bit trippy/mystical kind of. I am glad you liked it though.
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Inerbriated

    Well I loved the poem! It was just so smoothing!!!!! And it was just so awesome reading it!!!!!! So I hope to see more!!!!!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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