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    Influential X

    Never Will I give up
    Not until I'm satisfied
    I'll sock you dead
    If you even dare insult me

    I'll knock you down
    I'll chase you out of town
    And scare you to your hearts content

    You're stupidity sickens me
    That obnoxious attitude
    makes me wanna kill you
    But Lord knows I would never go as far
    As to cross against my rights

    This is just a fatal threat
    To remind you
    I wont quit
    Till I'm happy with what I got

    If I could controle this
    Then maybe I will leave it all behind

    Its one thing to complain
    But, hell when you're driving me insane
    Well then I think its time that you took a break
    From everything youve put up with from me
    I'm surprised you're still here
    Being treated as part of the scenery

    Show a little self respect
    I thought I taught you something
    When I fought you to the cold ground

    Why are you still afraid
    Of being beaten to you're death?
    Hell, its better to die a brave person
    Than to die a cheap coward

    I thought I taught you to stand up for yourself
    And not let anyone push you around
    Stomp you're feet for all the world to hear
    That You learned from me
    And earned the strength you needed to become
    A powerful girl

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    Re: Influential X

    I loved the wording and how the poem rolls off of the tongue. You wrote the poem in such a way that I'm sure people could relate to the emotion in the poem. Good job.
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    Re: Influential X

    I love your poem, it is pretty nice.

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