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![]() ![]() | Influential X Never Will I give up Not until I'm satisfied I'll sock you dead If you even dare insult me I'll knock you down I'll chase you out of town And scare you to your hearts content You're stupidity sickens me That obnoxious attitude makes me wanna kill you But Lord knows I would never go as far As to cross against my rights This is just a fatal threat To remind you I wont quit Till I'm happy with what I got If I could controle this Then maybe I will leave it all behind Its one thing to complain But, hell when you're driving me insane Well then I think its time that you took a break From everything youve put up with from me I'm surprised you're still here Being treated as part of the scenery Show a little self respect I thought I taught you something When I fought you to the cold ground Why are you still afraid Of being beaten to you're death? Hell, its better to die a brave person Than to die a cheap coward I thought I taught you to stand up for yourself And not let anyone push you around Stomp you're feet for all the world to hear That You learned from me And earned the strength you needed to become A powerful girl
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![]() ![]() | Re: Influential X I loved the wording and how the poem rolls off of the tongue. You wrote the poem in such a way that I'm sure people could relate to the emotion in the poem. Good job.
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![]() ![]() | Re: Influential X I love your poem, it is pretty nice.
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