Star Girl

Never Will I give up
Not until I'm satisfied
I'll sock you dead
If you even dare insult me

I'll knock you down
I'll chase you out of town
And scare you to your hearts content

You're stupidity sickens me
That obnoxious attitude
makes me wanna kill you
But Lord knows I would never go as far
As to cross against my rights

This is just a fatal threat
To remind you
I wont quit
Till I'm happy with what I got

If I could controle this
Then maybe I will leave it all behind

Its one thing to complain
But, hell when you're driving me insane
Well then I think its time that you took a break
From everything youve put up with from me
I'm surprised you're still here
Being treated as part of the scenery

Show a little self respect
I thought I taught you something
When I fought you to the cold ground

Why are you still afraid
Of being beaten to you're death?
Hell, its better to die a brave person
Than to die a cheap coward

I thought I taught you to stand up for yourself
And not let anyone push you around
Stomp you're feet for all the world to hear
That You learned from me
And earned the strength you needed to become
A powerful girl

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Kasai

I loved the wording and how the poem rolls off of the tongue. You wrote the poem in such a way that I'm sure people could relate to the emotion in the poem. Good job.

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ketaro

I love your poem, it is pretty nice.

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