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    Inked Angel

    As i sit here on the corner
    putting my thoughts into
    melody ,i see her walk by and
    i smile as she stand there .

    We talk as i play my song
    turns into love as we seem to
    talk about everything ,then she walks
    on into the night , as watch her leave
    i see an angel on her ankle with a tear
    on its cheek.

    Inked angel how i wish i could
    wipe that tear away , the night is so
    lonely and my song it plays for you ,
    just don't shed that tear.

    She walks away and is gone as i
    play on my fingers never slowing as my hands
    give feeling to things that i never though possible
    Inked Angel my thoughts are with you tonight.

    The sun now rising on a new day my song slows
    the air now silent as i put my guitar away and leave
    that corner think of her and the Inked Angel with that
    tear in its eye.

    Maybe i will see her again one day and make
    that angel smile as i play my melody for her
    and make her smile as i play on forever and
    keep that tear away.
    a friend of mine sent me 2 songs one of which
    was called Inked Angel there was no words to it just
    a awesome guitar melody that really lets your thoughts

    i asked my friend who did this song and they said it was
    someone here on AO but she wouldn't say who so i listened
    to it again and thought of this poem.

    I give credit to the tittle of my poem for the song
    that this person named it i added words to it myself
    since this is what came to me when i played the song
    again this person who ever it was is awesome with

    so who ever you are its a very cool song and im glad i got a chance
    to lsiten to it and any comments or sugestions would be cool
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Inked Angel

    Wow this is good, really good.
    props to the person who wrote the song, and props to you for adding the words that can bring a tear to my eye.
    and that is quite a feat.*tears up*

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    Wow... so flavorful. Both the poem and the explaination of how it came about. The poem is very romantic. So pure, falling in love with a stranger. Striving, the desire to ease the pain of the angel in ink.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Oh my goodness this is such a sweet poem. It would make a great song because it's so romantic and really lets your mind wonder. I don't know how you come up with these awesome poems,but I hope it rubs off on me soon lol.
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