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    Inner beast

    hey guys, so tis is wat i came up during the coral speaking competition, it started with- destroy me nt...then i continue working on it
    hope u guys like it

    The prophecy shall be fulfilled
    A demon’s child will rise
    Destined to do his master’s biding of destroying earth
    A beast of hell has been sent


    As the planets align
    On the night of a chilly summer
    The moonlight shone grey
    While millions of minions await their new master


    Silence filled the air
    Cries of pain are heard as the lid of his coffin slowly unveil
    The darkness in the heart is revealed in the eyes
    The stench of death is coming close


    A poem he recited
    Both of blood and iron


    “Destroy me not
    For I shall rise again from the ashes
    Seeking for blood thirsty revenge
    To feed upon your crushed soul”

    “Fear me you shall
    Victims of my past have never survived
    Releasing my full force power
    You will never see light again”


    And with that
    His destiny is sealed
    Man kind will perish
    What’s left of it is history…
    Last edited by elie26; Apr 19, 2006 at 04:57 AM.

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    Re: Inner beast

    You lost didn't you. No no no. Scary ::shivers:: cool, serious, dark, and etc. But if your going for that kinda poem. Great. It's good for the cateroy.
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    Re: Inner beast

    Yea, its a great piece, nice flow. I loved it, especially the color effects ^_^

    edit: TBh, this is one of the best works I have seen in this forum....... keep it up
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    Re: Inner beast

    my, my such rage n darknes. U must be the demon child. jking.

    I like it elie. keep it up.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Inner beast

    Very dark...I really like it.

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    Re: Inner beast

    Quote Originally Posted by bassdudez
    Yea, its a great piece, nice flow. I loved it, especially the color effects ^_^

    edit: TBh, this is one of the best works I have seen in this forum....... keep it up
    i never tried colours be4....im amazed tat it can do wonders..... and thx

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    Re: Inner beast

    awesome piece!

    really express feelings ,dark ones, but still feelings ,

    Congrats

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    Re: Inner beast

    this is so awesome!!! im stealing it!!!! hihihihihihi^^

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