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Reply With QuoteYou lost didn't you. No no no. Scary ::shivers:: cool, serious, dark, and etc. But if your going for that kinda poem. Great. It's good for the cateroy.
hey guys, so tis is wat i came up during the coral speaking competition, it started with- destroy me nt...then i continue working on it
hope u guys like it
The prophecy shall be fulfilled
A demon’s child will rise
Destined to do his master’s biding of destroying earth
A beast of hell has been sent
As the planets align
On the night of a chilly summer
The moonlight shone grey
While millions of minions await their new master
Silence filled the air
Cries of pain are heard as the lid of his coffin slowly unveil
The darkness in the heart is revealed in the eyes
The stench of death is coming close
A poem he recited
Both of blood and iron
“Destroy me not
For I shall rise again from the ashes
Seeking for blood thirsty revenge
To feed upon your crushed soul”
“Fear me you shall
Victims of my past have never survived
Releasing my full force power
You will never see light again”
And with that
His destiny is sealed
Man kind will perish
What’s left of it is history…
You lost didn't you. No no no. Scary ::shivers:: cool, serious, dark, and etc. But if your going for that kinda poem. Great. It's good for the cateroy.
Yea, its a great piece, nice flow. I loved it, especially the color effects ^_^
edit: TBh, this is one of the best works I have seen in this forum....... keep it up
my, my such rage n darknes. U must be the demon child. jking.
I like it elie. keep it up.
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
Very dark...I really like it.
i never tried colours be4....im amazed tat it can do wonders.....Originally Posted by bassdudez
awesome piece!
really express feelings ,dark ones, but still feelings ,
Congrats
this is so awesome!!! im stealing it!!!! hihihihihihi^^
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