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Old Apr 19, 2006, 04:55 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Inner beast

hey guys, so tis is wat i came up during the coral speaking competition, it started with- destroy me nt...then i continue working on it
hope u guys like it

The prophecy shall be fulfilled
A demon’s child will rise
Destined to do his master’s biding of destroying earth
A beast of hell has been sent


As the planets align
On the night of a chilly summer
The moonlight shone grey
While millions of minions await their new master


Silence filled the air
Cries of pain are heard as the lid of his coffin slowly unveil
The darkness in the heart is revealed in the eyes
The stench of death is coming close


A poem he recited
Both of blood and iron


“Destroy me not
For I shall rise again from the ashes
Seeking for blood thirsty revenge
To feed upon your crushed soul”

“Fear me you shall
Victims of my past have never survived
Releasing my full force power
You will never see light again”


And with that
His destiny is sealed
Man kind will perish
What’s left of it is history…
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Old Apr 19, 2006, 04:58 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Inner beast

You lost didn't you. No no no. Scary ::shivers:: cool, serious, dark, and etc. But if your going for that kinda poem. Great. It's good for the cateroy.
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Old Apr 19, 2006, 04:59 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Inner beast

Yea, its a great piece, nice flow. I loved it, especially the color effects ^_^

edit: TBh, this is one of the best works I have seen in this forum....... keep it up
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Old Apr 19, 2006, 04:59 AM   #4 (permalink)
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my, my such rage n darknes. U must be the demon child. jking.

I like it elie. keep it up.
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Old Apr 19, 2006, 05:00 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Very dark...I really like it.
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Old Apr 19, 2006, 05:02 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Yea, its a great piece, nice flow. I loved it, especially the color effects ^_^

edit: TBh, this is one of the best works I have seen in this forum....... keep it up
i never tried colours be4....im amazed tat it can do wonders..... and thx
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Old Apr 22, 2006, 09:41 PM   #7 (permalink)
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awesome piece!

really express feelings ,dark ones, but still feelings ,

Congrats
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this is so awesome!!! im stealing it!!!! hihihihihihi^^
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