Inner beast

elie26 · Apr 19, 2006, 04:55 AM

hey guys, so tis is wat i came up during the coral speaking competition, it started with- destroy me nt...then i continue working on it
hope u guys like it

The prophecy shall be fulfilled
A demon’s child will rise
Destined to do his master’s biding of destroying earth
A beast of hell has been sent

As the planets align
On the night of a chilly summer
The moonlight shone grey
While millions of minions await their new master

Silence filled the air
Cries of pain are heard as the lid of his coffin slowly unveil
The darkness in the heart is revealed in the eyes
The stench of death is coming close

A poem he recited
Both of blood and iron

“Destroy me not
For I shall rise again from the ashes
Seeking for blood thirsty revenge
To feed upon your crushed soul”

“Fear me you shall
Victims of my past have never survived
Releasing my full force power
You will never see light again”

And with that
His destiny is sealed
Man kind will perish
What’s left of it is history…

*Mr. K* · Apr 19, 2006, 04:58 AM

You lost didn't you. No no no. Scary ::shivers:: cool, serious, dark, and etc. But if your going for that kinda poem. Great. It's good for the cateroy.

*bassdudez* · Apr 19, 2006, 04:59 AM

Yea, its a great piece, nice flow. I loved it, especially the color effects ^_^

edit: TBh, this is one of the best works I have seen in this forum....... keep it up

*Blade X* · Apr 19, 2006, 04:59 AM

my, my such rage n darknes. U must be the demon child. jking.

I like it elie. keep it up.

White_Mage88 · Apr 19, 2006, 05:00 AM

Very dark...I really like it.

elie26 · Apr 19, 2006, 05:02 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bassdudez

Yea, its a great piece, nice flow. I loved it, especially the color effects ^_^

edit: TBh, this is one of the best works I have seen in this forum....... keep it up

i never tried colours be4....im amazed tat it can do wonders.....

and thx

Hitokiri Battousai · Apr 22, 2006, 09:41 PM

awesome piece!

really express feelings ,dark ones, but still feelings ,

Congrats

kakashi_sensei · Apr 22, 2006, 09:42 PM

this is so awesome!!! im stealing it!!!! hihihihihihi^^

Apr 19, 2006, 04:55 AM	#1 (permalink)
elie26 Elie Jelly Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Hell is an understatement Posts: 608 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,051	Inner beast hey guys, so tis is wat i came up during the coral speaking competition, it started with- destroy me nt...then i continue working on it hope u guys like it The prophecy shall be fulfilled A demon’s child will rise Destined to do his master’s biding of destroying earth A beast of hell has been sent As the planets align On the night of a chilly summer The moonlight shone grey While millions of minions await their new master Silence filled the air Cries of pain are heard as the lid of his coffin slowly unveil The darkness in the heart is revealed in the eyes The stench of death is coming close A poem he recited Both of blood and iron “Destroy me not For I shall rise again from the ashes Seeking for blood thirsty revenge To feed upon your crushed soul” “Fear me you shall Victims of my past have never survived Releasing my full force power You will never see light again” And with that His destiny is sealed Man kind will perish What’s left of it is history… __________________ Last edited by elie26; Apr 19, 2006 at 04:57 AM.
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Apr 19, 2006, 04:58 AM	#2 (permalink)
Mr. K THUMBSUCKING ADDICTION Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Alaska Posts: 1,268 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,359	Re: Inner beast *You lost didn't you. No no no. Scary ::shivers:: cool, serious, dark, and etc. But if your going for that kinda poem. Great. It's good for the cateroy.* __________________ ≥°≤ [?] █▓▒░░▒▓█ [?] ≥°≤ ◕ ◡ ◕;;;;[?]
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Apr 19, 2006, 04:59 AM	#3 (permalink)
bassdudez AO shady bystander Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Wherever Kirika goes.... Posts: 895 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 502	Re: Inner beast Yea, its a great piece, nice flow. I loved it, especially the color effects ^_^ edit: TBh, this is one of the best works I have seen in this forum....... keep it up __________________ Kastelic's creation <<::\|\|.Bass's AO fanart.\|\|\|..AO Leaders..\|\|\|.Must-read rules of AO.\|\|::>>
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Blade X AO's Demon Slayer Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one. Posts: 1,606 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,446	Re: Inner beast my, my such rage n darknes. U must be the demon child. jking. I like it elie. keep it up. __________________ Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
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White_Mage88 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 323 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 2,426	Re: Inner beast Very dark...I really like it.
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Hitokiri Battousai Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Panama Posts: 216 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 382	Re: Inner beast awesome piece! really express feelings ,dark ones, but still feelings , Congrats __________________
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