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    inner darkness of an unclear mind

    I tremble in the darkness,
    I feel like I could stab myself with a knife.

    My heart is dark,
    and my future is unclear.

    Cause of all my sadness in the past,
    I feel I could kill myself.

    All because of the anguish,
    I feel like nothing.

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    Re: inner darkness of an unclear mind

    wow so dark so full of death so amazing i love it so hope to see more



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    Re: inner darkness of an unclear mind

    wow such dark emotion. never seen a poem like this before! but its great anyways!=)

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    Re: inner darkness of an unclear mind

    srry i accidentaly commented twice my bad!! well since it has to be longer...your poem seems like it has a sad emotion in it, but it's a cool poem!

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    Re: inner darkness of an unclear mind

    wow I love it.
    it has soo much emotion for such a short poem.

    wow I love it.
    hope to see more

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    Re: inner darkness of an unclear mind

    O.o I'm scared of you I must admit... I just can't read your poems- they're good but they're too dark for my happy mind- I usually like dark things but not when it comes to pain like in your poems... it's just too real...

    This one too- so short but tells more than enough... nice work... but it just freaks me out! But I think it just proves you know quite well how to affect people with your words...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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