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Reply With QuoteGood poem. I like the part that says "A feeling burning like fire" You wrote this well. Good work.
I know the inner me exists
I feel the pounding heart beat
A pained loss of love that I miss
pain welling up for eyes to leak
I feel the soul's desire
The heat of hate
A feeling burning like fire
feelings that are faint
I know they're there
Waiting to emerge
In beats a heart with ware
I know I have the inner urge
The need to know the inner me
Good poem. I like the part that says "A feeling burning like fire" You wrote this well. Good work.
hmm, not so bad.. nice poem.
improve your skills ok..
i hope to read more from you..
see yah!
If you don't like me, it's mind over matter.
I don't mind and you don't matter
I liked this poem quite well, enjoyed reading it, I could find my feelings in it witch is really good in a poem! Good work!!!
nice use of language showing that the real u wants to burst out and tell the world. short n sweet. hope u write more.
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pretty good poem..i would have to say that the soul's desire...full of hate? is someone angry at someone? = D
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