Insane Heart Breakdown

Here's a new song that I just wrote today. :) It's been a few days since my last song,I think lol Somewhere around there lol Anyway i'm sure that the people that likes my work will be happy 2 see something new once again. :) It's about how i've been feeling lately,so I thought why not write a song about it lol :) Oh and sorry if it's a bit long,just can't help myself sometimes lol :) Well I hope that everyone enjoys my new song. :) Please read and comment :) Thank you very much *bows* :)


Title-Insane Heart Breakdown


What did I do wrong?
Why did you abandon me,in my time of need?
How could you do this to me,when you said that you loved me?
Why did you leave me all alone,in the cold?!...

"What crime did I commit to be treated this way?"

I don't understand you,No more
I don't know anything,Anymore
I scream in my sleep,everynight in my dreams
I don't understand myself or anything,No more!...

"Why is this happening to me?"

My heart is fadin,Ice is craving it
I'm growing cold all inside,I don't know why
Everytime I think of you my heart begins to ache,my body begins to shake
The tears are comein they just wont stop,I can't stop the scream that I release!...

"My heart is frezzing,it's gonna break into"

Everytime I close my eyes,you come to mind
I shake my head and scream "No!,No more of this!"
Your driving me insane and you don't even know it,do you?
You abandon me just like the others,So why should I cry?!...

"I'm dieing all inside,Heart and Soul fading"

I close my eyes and begin to cry and scream for release
I don't know why you have this hold on me and my broken heart
But it must stop,Before I lose this Me again
I don't want to be a stranger to myself again,No more!...

"I don't want to lose the Me that is here now"

I don't want to die,Not again
My body,soul and heart can't take that,Never again
I wish I could be fully free from you,Once again
But I don't think i'll ever recover from this,Not from this Nightmare again!...

"The sin that I have commited has scared me for life"

This was your doing,for makeing me fall for you
The gift that you left me was nothing but Tears and this awlful Sin!
I wish I could dream but everytime I close my eyes your there,it has become a Nightmare
Would you just leave me be,while i'm in my final peace?...

"I've loved.I've sined.I've screamed and I have cryed so many times.I've lost myself...I've gone insane!"...

What did I do wrong?
Why did you abandon me,in my time of need?
How could you do this to me,when you said that you loved me?
Why did you leave me all alone,in the cold?!...

"I'm finally all alone,cryin and screamin.Diein and to tired of tryin.I'm losing myself to everything.I finally lost it all.I've finally gone Insane..."
"All cause of you..."...

Great!!! I love it!!! This is awesome Shinigami's_Angel! You keep amazing me everytime you write! This one drew me in and took me along for the ride! Outstanding!!!!

"Look for the mischievous paw prints in the sand, and as they disappear into this earth torn land. Will they be true or stay forever blue? That's were this BlueFox will stand."

BlueFox1

Thank you sooooooooo very much BlueFox1 :) I'm sooooooo glad that you loved it. :)

very awesome poem sis and i am glad to see another one from you
and this poem really says something about love and being left alone
and its sad when it happens but you do move on wich i a good thing but this
song really shows the pain you have very aweseome song i love it

Thank you very much big bro :) I'm glad that you liked it also.I've been getting pretty depressed,which you know why lol So I thought maybe writting it out would make me feel better and it sure did. :) I feel like my old self again. :) But anyway,i'm very happy that you liked it though. :)

i really did and your awesome at this and yea i know why and told you it
would feel better to evnt like this and it was great how you did it

Wow! great song you have there shinigami. that song made me read from the beginning till the end. and i do love it! the words expressed the feelings beautifully. keep it up.

@ HolderOfTheDarkChalice-Thank you :) Ya know I always try my best :) Yep ya sure did,and i'm soooooo happy with the way it came out. :)

@ Raja_psyche-Thank you soooooo very much Raja *bows* I'm glad 2 hear that you loved my new song.And don't worry,I will lol :)