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All my emotions have been burn
My feelings rage in flames
My mind has been turn
But everything never stays the same
My spirit have not changed
I only have seen this light
My soul is in rage
But my heart feel so bright
Will i get out of this confusion
Everything I see always spins
How can I not see this Illusion
Will this time ever ends
Will I hear a child's cry
Will we survive through this flood
We will swim, but never die
Yet I see him in tears of blood
wow, sounds great, i really like the "rage" word in the poem, you seem to know how to use it well. I didn't know you were such a great writer
hey thanks i thought of this about 10 minutes lol but i like the bottom piece
I like the anger and confusion used in this poem. Keep up the good work friend!!!
lol thanks youkai, your not a bad poem writer youself lol
great poem i promised id comment so here it is
i like the bottom part
"Will I hear a child's cry
Will we survive through this flood
We will swim, but never die
Yet I see him in tears of blood"