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    Insane and Reality

    All my emotions have been burn
    My feelings rage in flames
    My mind has been turn
    But everything never stays the same

    My spirit have not changed
    I only have seen this light
    My soul is in rage
    But my heart feel so bright

    Will i get out of this confusion
    Everything I see always spins
    How can I not see this Illusion
    Will this time ever ends

    Will I hear a child's cry
    Will we survive through this flood
    We will swim, but never die
    Yet I see him in tears of blood

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    Re: Insane and Reality

    wow, sounds great, i really like the "rage" word in the poem, you seem to know how to use it well. I didn't know you were such a great writer

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    Re: Insane and Reality

    hey thanks i thought of this about 10 minutes lol but i like the bottom piece

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    Re: Insane and Reality

    I like the anger and confusion used in this poem. Keep up the good work friend!!!

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    lol thanks youkai, your not a bad poem writer youself lol

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    Re: Insane and Reality

    great poem i promised id comment so here it is
    i like the bottom part
    "Will I hear a child's cry
    Will we survive through this flood
    We will swim, but never die
    Yet I see him in tears of blood"
    Don't tell me the sky is the limit, when there are footprints on the moon


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