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Apr 27, 2007, 10:41 AM
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 | Insanity This is something I'm working on.furthermore, I know there are a lot of confusing points to this..that is why I'm still working on it. But before I actually do, I would like your insights first. Look at her walking down the street, With that fake smile she wears so proudly. Who is she trying to fool? I can see right through you... 'I don't want to feel anymore And my insanity is my only cure. I don't want be here surrounded by lies, Where people walk about in their ignorant lives. So...won't you just give me back my insanity?' You wipe your tears from those empty eyes... Lying to yourself that you'll always be alright. Self infliction is your addiction, Hoping your one step closer to instinction... Softly cryinig...give me back my insanity. 'I don't want to hear you say, That I'll forever live in shades of grey. Helplessly pretending to live... While I die a little each time I give. So won't you just please... Give me back my insanity.' I look at you with such cruel eyes, Telling you all these happy lies... Asking me why won't I give you back your insanity... I gently smile and say... I just can't give up on myself, Hoping one day I'll truely smile and say... I'm free... Note: It's one person arguing inside oneself. The italics are the parts when she's speaking out loud.
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Apr 27, 2007, 10:59 AM
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| Re: Insanity Yeah... this confuses me a little bit, but I like it... The confusioness just makes me read it again and again and with each time I start to understand and it's good that you make me read something again and agian for I almost never do that... I like it... *starts reading again, word by word, line by line and between the lines also* |
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Apr 27, 2007, 11:08 AM
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| Re: Insanity Haha, thanks a lot Lasura for the comment. I know, it also confuses me a bit...but I get it of course (Since I wrote it). There are just times that you catch yourself when your writing and say, 'What did I just write?'. But hopefully I'll finish this soon. I've sorta put it aside, since I'm too busy playing pokemon (Don't judge me...it's evil I say...pekomon is evil).
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Apr 27, 2007, 02:12 PM
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| Re: Insanity Nice poem! I like it. Hope to see more in the future.  Smile for all.
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Apr 28, 2007, 01:51 AM
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| Re: Insanity Nice poem. I guess some people do tend to think that whenever things get a little crazy the feel like they could go insane. Good job.
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