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Sep 05, 2006, 08:42 PM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Terabithia
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 Credits: 273 | Intimidation Got The Best Of You It Looks Like You're Drowning, In your bed again Night after Night It's no surprise Thoughts racing in your mind What To to do the next day What to say to everyone Ay, we all play Do what you want But dont get in there way They'll try to hurt you But you gota fight back Get up, And punch them out No one said it was simple You need to be strong Don't cower in a corner Drop those bombs Do it like its nothing No one gives a damn Just strut around like your one of them They'll belive what they see But then turn right around And give it to them Make sure those blisters stay So they dont fade away They want a good kick You know its true So give 'em what they want And Be proud in the end 'Cause what you did took time For you to realize They were wrong And you werent So you did what you could To set them right
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Sep 05, 2006, 09:02 PM
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| King Of Darkness  Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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Credits: 3,320 | Re: Intimidation Got The Best Of You very awesome poem i liked this alot and its true stand up something or you will fall for everything. learn this now and problems want be as big when you get older/ very cool poem i love this one |
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Sep 07, 2006, 08:25 PM
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 Warrior Monk  Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Monk Society
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Credits: 17,275 | Re: Intimidation Got The Best Of You Quote:
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Sep 08, 2006, 01:47 AM
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 Domme  Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida
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Credits: 1,490 | Re: Intimidation Got The Best Of You Wee, finally something worth mentioning as good. The first verse caught my attention, the second made it waver, and the third? I never even finished. The amount of description in the first verse is sweet. Now, shouldnt the supporting verses be contained of some sort of description as well?
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Sep 09, 2006, 01:06 AM
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 Upcoming Legend  Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility
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Credits: 1,176 | Re: Intimidation Got The Best Of You This is good! You let the person reading it really feel what's going on! I like it! Keep up the good work! "Look for the mischievous paw prints in the sand, and as they disappear into this earth torn land. Will they be true or stay forever blue? That's were this BlueFox will stand." BlueFox1 |
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