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    Re: The Island a poet and you..

    I will jamie.. :/ sheesh.. ~.~

    Thx my friend ^^ u think so? glad u liked it... sure.. will do so ^^

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    Re: The Island a poet and you..

    A very nice poem... Reminded me a little bit of the dead man... Please make dead man gone!!!
    And it made me dreamy- the descriptons are very nice, you could imagine it all very well...

    I was especially moved by these lines:
    "A friend passes by and waves then leaves,
    I just smiled to please him."
    I could really just see it happening...very nice

    And of course it's always nice to get an answer to your poem ^^

    A very nice work Ray ^^ I'm waiting forward to see more, but you know I am ^^

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    Re: The Island a poet and you..

    yu did a great job on this poem
    it little sad but i love the ending
    it bring hope to that one day the persons names
    on the tree will both come back someday.
    keep up the good work

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    Re: The Island a poet and you..

    Lol ^^ u liked the ending? i tried making something new.. to show hope ^^

    aww...Lasura.. ^^ thx~!! sure ^^ will make more.. just for u ^^
    yea...living near the beach is nice...

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    Re: The Island a poet and you..

    Good poem. This is the type of poem I can be cool with you know. Some emotions, but I'm not overwhelm with it, on top of that it's bittersweet and not wah wah wah.

    Good one Ray, but you'll never get that poem from me

    'Cause you give me something / That makes me scared, alright / This could be nothing / But I'm willing to give it a try / Please give me something
    'Cause someday I might call you from my heart

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    Re: The Island a poet and you..

    aww that was such a great poem your really good! i cant wait to read more from you!

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    Re: The Island a poet and you..

    Lol ^^ thx man.. but i really wanna read ur poem.. :/ *pokes* are u shy of showing it? *raises eyebrow*

    Lol ^^ sure ^^ i'd be writing more...but u can try my previous poem...Space...it's a bit childish.. lol

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    Re: The Island a poet and you..

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    Lol ^^ thx man.. but i really wanna read ur poem.. :/ *pokes* are u shy of showing it? *raises eyebrow*

    Lol ^^ sure ^^ i'd be writing more...but u can try my previous poem...Space...it's a bit childish.. lol
    lol alright, since I talk the talk I'll try to walk the walk and go ahead and embarrass myself.

    ------
    Welcome to the world young baby
    Sleep tightly in your mother's arm tonight
    Preparing you for the long journey

    Having your first nightmare
    "trouble sleeping poor baby," your mother says
    Sitting by your bed while you slept the night away

    Off to college, venturing out of the nest
    Give your mother a hug
    and off to life's first real test

    Wedding day, the first day of the rest of your life
    Your mother gives you a hug
    knowing full well you'll be a great wife

    Losing her battle to age
    "try to get some rest mom," you say
    Sitting by her bed while she move toward her last days

    Welcome back to your birthplace young baby
    Gather around your mother's bed tonight.
    Praying for her, wishing her a smooth journey.
    ------

    Wow that was lame there you go, don't say I never did it

    This has been a product of thinking in the shower

    'Cause you give me something / That makes me scared, alright / This could be nothing / But I'm willing to give it a try / Please give me something
    'Cause someday I might call you from my heart

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