A very nice poem... Reminded me a little bit of the dead man... Please make dead man gone!!!
And it made me dreamy- the descriptons are very nice, you could imagine it all very well...
I was especially moved by these lines:
"A friend passes by and waves then leaves,
I just smiled to please him."
I could really just see it happening...very nice
And of course it's always nice to get an answer to your poem ^^
A very nice work Ray ^^ I'm waiting forward to see more, but you know I am ^^