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    Isolation

    Isolation

    I’m all alone, left to bleed,
    I’m cold, and half asleep,
    If I die, all alone,
    I will cry, I’ll rot till bones,
    But I still end up, alone.
    I’m half dead, I need a friend,
    I’m in my bed, thoughts heavy as lead,
    I’m now, no longer bound,
    By societies painful grasps, but even though,
    I still end up all alone,


    yes its short, i would sing it out but, theres no way i'm gonna do that!

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    Re: Isolation

    I feel as if it didn't have a healthy flow to it. It just didn't click with me. Dark poem, but it just didn't flow for me.

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