A broken soul, a broken house
Whose cries were as loud as a mouse
No one to hear and no one to care
Now the guilty has pain to bear
I was alone to bear this pain.
I had killed my clan and no one was there to guide me or shed their light.
No one wanted to help me restore some of what I had left behind.
I was a broken soul left to die.
I clutched my Akatsuki uniform tightly around me
as I looked around in the dark.
I was a murderer.
A filthy murderer.
I had blood on my hands all the time.
No one thought that I was sad for what I was doing.
They all hated me because they thought I had a stone heart.
I really like this:2thumbs: You did a good job describing the Itachi's emotional state.
o my god... This is... just wow. Itachi-san is my all-time favorite, and now I just found someone who also understands his pain. You made me cry, you really did. I absolutely love it.
thank you lol itachi-san is also my favourite charcter and i cried when i saw the episode where sasuke kills him :'(
You didn't write this, this is a portion of the "Dead House" poem from the following link.
Poems of Naruto Characters Chapter 1: Itachi, a Naruto fanfic - FanFiction.Net