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    Itachi

    A broken soul, a broken house
    Whose cries were as loud as a mouse
    No one to hear and no one to care
    Now the guilty has pain to bear

    I was alone to bear this pain.
    I had killed my clan and no one was there to guide me or shed their light.
    No one wanted to help me restore some of what I had left behind.
    I was a broken soul left to die.
    I clutched my Akatsuki uniform tightly around me
    as I looked around in the dark.
    I was a murderer.
    A filthy murderer.
    I had blood on my hands all the time.
    No one thought that I was sad for what I was doing.
    They all hated me because they thought I had a stone heart.

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    Re: Itachi

    I really like this You did a good job describing the Itachi's emotional state.
    Sword in hand, fire in heart, I walk towards my future just playing my part.
    The school of the undefeated East! The winds of the king! Zenshin! Keiretsu! Tempa! Kyoran! Look! The East is burning red!” (G Gundam)
    Ride Fast, Live Free & Stay strong.

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    o my god... This is... just wow. Itachi-san is my all-time favorite, and now I just found someone who also understands his pain. You made me cry, you really did. I absolutely love it.

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    Re: Itachi

    thank you lol itachi-san is also my favourite charcter and i cried when i saw the episode where sasuke kills him :'(

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    Re: Itachi

    You didn't write this, this is a portion of the "Dead House" poem from the following link.

    Poems of Naruto Characters Chapter 1: Itachi, a Naruto fanfic - FanFiction.Net

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