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    It'll be alright

    As well as the sun rises every morning,
    As well as summer comes after winter so cold
    She’ll come back in this lonely morning-
    She could never leave you alone.

    Nothing can untie the threads of destiny,
    Nothing can change the rhythm of time-
    You can’t make the time flow faster,
    You can no longer change what has happened.

    These worries only make your head greyer,
    With them you can not make it all better.
    Smile at the rising sun
    Know- it will all be alright

    Nothing can stop the flowing of a river
    Nothing can change its course-
    As well as there are riffles of pain
    There are also calm basins of gold
    And you’re just a fish in this river called life-
    You have to get through it all.

    Be strong my friend,
    Don’t ever give up!
    She will come back-
    She never leaves her worshipers...
    This goddess of love.

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: It'll be alright

    Haha, nice! ^_^ Is this for a friend? I like it because it's short and you repeated some lines to get your point accross, well done.

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    Re: It'll be alright

    Yes ^^ this is for my friends, first it was intended for one person but, as I wrote, I remembered others and just put the thought of them too... This goes to all my friends and everyone who feels like giving up or something...

    I'm glad you like it Rave ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: It'll be alright

    Hmmm *nods* good indeed..i see you are progressing well... ^^ ur poems getting better and better each time... i like this 1 very much keep on the good work~! *pokes laura*

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    Again you're poking me... wanna fight?! ^^ lol jk- not in public

    Thank You Ray very much ^^ I'm glad to hear you think I'm getting better and I'm oh so glad to hear you like this ^^ I guess I freaked you out with the last two (yay!!!)

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: It'll be alright

    i liked the poem very much which shocked
    me cuz i usually dont like poems that dont
    rhyme but any ways good job

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    Re: It'll be alright

    this was intended for a friend you say? Interesting.
    There was something about that last line... where you said "Shell never leave her worshipers". That really made me think.
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    Re: It'll be alright

    I love this poem! It's short, it's for your cool friend, and it's just perfect to read really! I hope to see more ok!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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