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    Re: It'll be alright

    I really love it Not like It ..
    I think this make me think for one mint in one I know it really ...* friend *
    Be strong my friend,
    Don’t ever give up!
    She will come back-
    *It'll be alright* I hope that ...Great Job...^^

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    Re: It'll be alright

    Look out, you're talent's showing again. And I don't mean any body parts

    Nice work. Interesting. I've never been much of a quitter, tend to be a bit too stubborn for that.
    "quitters never win, winners never quit"
    "Worry is like a rocking chair. It gives you something to do, but gets you nowhere."

    You're obviously not an Aussie. If you were, this'd most likely be called "She'll be right mate"...

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    WoW!!! ^^ Thank You all guys!!!!!! I'm glad you liked this...

    @ levitatinganimelover:
    Well I'm really glad you like it then, it must mean this is quite good ^^ lol
    I can't really write in rhythmes- my English vocabulary is not good enough as well as it makes me really stressed if I have to make something rhythme...

    @ Peach:
    Yes, for a friend, but I think you might be thinking of the wrong guy... ^^ lol
    Well... the last line... as I said earlier- at first this was intended for one person and he wasn't waitin' for love together, but then I understood that it would be nice if I'd put in this thought so that this poem could help- give hope for more people, as well as it gives hope to me... gods never leave their worshipers that's for sure and I see love as a goddess sometimes...

    @ Kuwi:
    ^^ I'm glad you like it!!! And I enjoyed writing it too... it's nice to sometimes write something that is not full of pain and saddness, but full of hope and smiles... But I'm sure you know how that is you sunny person ^^

    @ xxoxx:
    I'm happy you like it so much and I hope it will help you too, to take off that sad sig (though it's very beautifull) and make the world shine again ^^

    @ Daniel:
    *bows* Thank You... Your comments always mean a lot to me ^^
    I like those quotes- especially the second one... I hope my friend can see it ^^ lol
    And I find myself too stubborn for quitting too... I always come back... ^^ lol

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: It'll be alright

    I like this poem for it expressed optimism and
    encouragement for a friend who is wrapped by the blanket of sadness and hopelessness.


    These worries only make your head greyer,
    With them you can not make it all better.
    Smile at the rising sun
    Know- it will all be alright
    I loved these lines of the poem that you made. I think encourages me to look at the good side of things...
    continuous worrying will result in premature aging. ^^

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Thank You Raja_psyche!!!! ^^ I'm really glad you like it and I'm happy to hear that it helps you look at the good side of the things, that's what I wanted to achieve and it means a lot to hear that it works ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: It'll be alright

    This is a very heartwarming poem. ^_^ I like this one!

    It is a very encouraging piece of work. Good job, Laura!


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    Re: It'll be alright

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    I can't really write in rhythmes- my English vocabulary is not good enough as well as it makes me really stressed if I have to make something rhythme...
    Not good with English? Could have fooled me. You're doing pretty damn good at it. Better than I do sometimes. Let's just say I'm loving this new spell checker feature on Firefox internet browser...

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    @ Daniel:*bows* Thank You... Your comments always mean a lot to me ^^
    I like those quotes- especially the second one... I hope my friend can see it ^^ lol
    And I find myself too stubborn for quitting too... I always come back... ^^ lol
    Glad to help. I've usually got a few quotes up my sleeve. I do tend to collect them. Just keep up the good work.


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    Re: It'll be alright

    A touch of sweet sweet sweetness is what comes to mind. It has great vocabulary, but it could have been neat to use different words and not repeat as much.

    Your writing here makes me remember a few things I wrote back last year. I'm working so much right now and writing so little. Your poem makes me feel that even if sometimes one may be fragile deep inside, there is always somewhere deeper within that you can dig out to bring back a spark of hope in the eyes of someone completely at loss with everything.

    Great job, I hope to see your evolution as time goes by and maybe one day buy your work if you go professional
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