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    It's About Nothing.

    This poem's about you
    It's about me
    It's about what's been
    About what could be

    It's about what I think
    About what you thought
    This poem's about nothing
    How all is for naught

    I liked your personality
    How you knew about genocide
    I thought it was insanity
    You took my heart like cyanide

    Where it all went wrong
    I can't seem to tell
    Together for so long
    And it all goes to hell

    Maybe another man
    Or something I said
    Our bond blew away like sand
    Now to you I'm dead

    We had so much going
    Our hearts were fused as one
    How could you end it knowing
    My love was second to none

    Maybe you just didn't know
    About everything you had
    Well now it's gone like melted snow
    You've turned what's good to bad

    These wounds may never heal
    You've cut me to the bone
    You've stamped them with your seal
    Now they can't be sown

    I'm not going to cry
    Just pick up and move on
    I'll look towards the sky
    And know my love is gone



    This is a poem I made a few months ago, but I felt like finally sharing it so vuala! Enjoy and make comments.
    Last edited by Exoparadapsyphobia; Oct 18, 2007 at 08:08 PM.
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    *applauses* A Very nice piece of writing!!!


    Your rhyming in the poem is perfect, The title really goes along with this poem and It's easy and quick to read And the poem is very understandable.

    Again...Lovely work and hope to see more from you!!!

    -Zainab

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    Re: It's About Nothing.

    *stands and applaudes*
    Bravo, Bravo. I must say that this poem is excellent, in the fact that the ryhming and the pace of it.
    it is understandable and it cut me to the bone.
    so take a seat and let everyone praise you on a job well done.

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    Re: It's About Nothing.

    Wow, that was really well done. You can feel everything that you are going thru. It was nicely put together and very well written. Anybody that reads this and dosen't feel something is just lying to themselves. Hope to see more of your work.

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    Re: It's About Nothing.

    hey...you guys stealing my stand up applause move.. xD

    well.. a good poem i see there.. nicely done ^^ and i agree with them guys up there

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    Re: It's About Nothing.

    Wow, I like this.... But, I get the feeling this poem really is about something I loved it, some parts are things I could be telling people I know too.
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    Re: It's About Nothing.

    Wow, I didn't really expect to get that positive of a reaction. Thanks a lot for commenting; now I'm inspired to write some more and I can't wait to show you all the rest of my work. Pretty much every poem I make is made to ryhme perfectly or as much as I can get it to. I have a pet peeve about poems that don't ryhme, but don't let make you think I don't appreciate them; strictly adhering to that kind of writing style restricts creativity, so I understand if not everyone bends that way. But again, thanks a bunch you guys, that really made my day.
    Last edited by Exoparadapsyphobia; Oct 17, 2007 at 08:02 PM.
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    Re: It's About Nothing.

    nice poem good work keep it up and u might one day be the best poem person in the world so good job

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