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Reply With QuoteAgain, doyou see what I mean byformat? It's the same bloody thing. I didnt even want to read this because I'm tired of looking at it.
It's about time
When things seem just to fade away,
At the peak of total loss.
Reality just hits you in the face,
There isn't a perfect world out there.
Hoping is just not enough sometimes,
Believing and taking action is what counts.
It's about being there when it all takes place,
Without loosing a moment of the present.
Holding onto things that are dear,
Facing a moment of true resurrection.
Light finally shines upon a land,
Covered once by eternal darkness.
It's about time that changes took place,
Only death could come from a certain lack.
Finally things are looking up for the best,
Voids are filling up one after another.
The true meaning of community has arrived,
Sticking together no matter what finally finds its meaning
Note: Listened to "It's about time" from Lilix while composing this none rhyming rhyme, which would be considered a free verse poem. I hope you all like it as your(directed to the one I wrote this to) part of the "It's about time" in this, the other part is the community that is returning :P
Originally Posted by Soldat of life
Thanks to Xelhes for this amazing work of art ^.^
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Again, doyou see what I mean byformat? It's the same bloody thing. I didnt even want to read this because I'm tired of looking at it.
Seduced by Flesh
Oh....now I see.
But is it that bad to keep the same format????? I'll take it in PM, but for all to know, this is my format when I'm writing something that interests me, but not enough to truly develop a unique form. I have done so on occasions, but it takes much more time and inspiration to do so. In short, I'm lazy most of the time to try and do new styles, but when I am really motivated, I try harder. That's about it.
Thanks to Xelhes for this amazing work of art ^.^
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i am not a Poetry major but it really sound nice u can easy see the meaning behind the word so this poem has depth between facing death with honor and face it like a coward, but showing all the feeling that go with it format should be and after thought. looking nice does not mean it is good
hehehehe (^_^)
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