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    It's always about you~

    It is isn’t it?
    It’s your life you value selfishly
    How can you fake this anymore?
    To just turn your back away and choose to just ignore

    Thought you were my cure
    I tried to catch my breath again
    I haven’t slept again
    I don’t how I got this way

    I’ll never be alright

    This is how my mind is racing …
    Although, my heart is slowing,
    I am gaining the colour of death
    And the credit goes to you

    This ain’t love and this ain’t hate
    This is nothing but pure emotions
    Flowing down my face,
    Pouring out of me

    … Transparent and rouge …

    This is not thoughtless incense
    Coming out of a mindless boy
    This is not – a typical depressing poem
    Surfacing out of a person of subnormal intelligence

    I won’t waste myself anymore
    I’ll take everything from the inside
    And throw it all away
    ‘Cause I swear for the last time

    It’s over.

    My heart is at its limit;
    The insidious flames of pure despondency have consumed it
    My mind,
    My soul,
    My dignity
    My entire sense of being

    Are nothing more but
    Defeated, Dejected, crushed
    Because?

    It’s always about you.

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    Re: It's always about you~

    Reminds me of someone...

    Like me for example.

    XD

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    Re: It's always about you~

    Uh huh. Glad you like the poem - -;

    Kidding.. haha, it's fine. I know it's in shambles right now, but I'm not gonna work on it.

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    Re: It's always about you~

    At least yours is way better than my poems.

    That's why I'm never gonna post my works.

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    Re: It's always about you~

    Have you read my previous ones? They're pathetic, and by reading your poems, you have potential; just keep practicing, be more articulate.

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    Re: It's always about you~

    wow...I can relate to what you're saying and your words blew me away. I felt like there was a spear made of ice jabbing me in the chest...it's beautiful and powerful.

    Very Deeply Misunderstood

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