Thread: It's Been A While...

Very good.I liked it.
This stanza kinda reminds me of shikamaru

Take a look, he's back in the game,
Meji Imaru says to friend and foe..
"I'm lazy dont you know.."
Troublesome is his favorite word,
Bothersome.. probably third..
He doesn't like to do much these days.
He'd rather watch the clouds pass like haze.

Very good!

My friends say I remind them most of Shikamaru.. I do use the word troublesome alot and Ironically, I like looking at the clouds pass by on a sunny day. I seem to use the fraise 'thats such drag' when I dissagree with something as well, and when annoyed I often revert to the japanese word for damn which is Nanda. Although I don't ever think I heard him say damn. I'm also 19 points off genius IQ and I like to use strategy.. Although I never learned to play shogi or chess I'm fairly good at Checkers without thinking and if I thought I would probably be alot better off, hell, I even sleep during my classes and still pass them.

I did this poem so that everyone would know I've comeback to AO

I would like some feed back >_<

You seem to be a very proud individual.

That is always good.

Definitely a change of tone compare to most other poems...let's see if you can live up to your own hype.

haha, its a very rhythmic poem , it give me an oldschool hip-hop type feel.
i like this alot, as Legend said, its very confident and 'top dog' like.
sleeping in class is also a great trait, i did, and pretty aced my tests base solely on common knowledge and logical thinking :P

Originally Posted by SasuraiHell

haha, its a very rhythmic poem , it give me an oldschool hip-hop type feel.
i like this alot, as Legend said, its very confident and 'top dog' like.
sleeping in class is also a great trait, i did, and pretty aced my tests base solely on common knowledge and logical thinking :P

It seems that common knowlege and logical thinking is all you'll ever need in life xD (this coming from a junior whos in math 1) but yeah. Ironically, I'm usually the underdog.. oh well, this year may just give me a change of pase. Thanks for the comments everyone. Keep em' coming!

awwww good poem.
I like it lost.
It rhymed and it had like really cool beat to it.

.lol. I like it lots.
Keep it up and hope to see more.
^.^

Originally Posted by P.R. Princes

awwww good poem.
I like it lost.
It rhymed and it had like really cool beat to it.

.lol. I like it lots.
Keep it up and hope to see more.
^.^

Well, I can't let my adoring fans down I suppose I'll continue writing.